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Comments of chapter undefined of [REWRITE IS UP] The Dragonborn Comes: A Self Insert

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BoiGeorge
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You're great with the descriptions and details, looking forward to seeing where this goes! :)

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BoiGeorge
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You helped me on discord my friend with the ancient language (Inheritance) stuff on fictions server, I bookmarked your book then. I look forward to seeing what you do :)

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Classic_Balrog
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Started out a bit quick, but I can see potential. Keep at it, I’ve been needing a Skyrim-esque fanfic for a while.

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Lycarus
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No harem? I hate harem

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SHEOGORATH
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Here it is!

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Navasu_69
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Brezer
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one chapter and already trying to sell? [img=faceslap]

Mr_even
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hermione and luna for harem

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LeProphet
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i came across your name author in someone elses comment section saying you are an author so i decided to give it a read and its good so far so keep it up!

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Lyus
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I'll be honest why is it in most ff if you wake in a childs body you think you killed them? Why is not that your memories have just unlocked?

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tastyradish
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Love your writing style bro! Glad you're back :)

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IgnisPrimus
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Thanks for the chapter

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JIM_MoriOg
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Thank for chapter

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INDRA32
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This first chapter was very good, Even if this is only the first chapter I think that this novel can be extremely good Thanks for the chapter

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Redex933
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thanks for the chapter

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Hyuga_Tobirama
Hyuga_TobiramaLv5Hyuga_Tobirama

Intresting I can see the potential

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Akisu
AkisuLv13Akisu

It's a good start, only thing we didn't really get any answers for is, how is the dragonborn differerent from normal magicals in HP world?

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Shaggnasty
ShaggnastyLv14Shaggnasty

A new harry potter fanfic! Yay! Had fun with the last one hope this one is even better.

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5paghetti_5auce
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thanks for the chapter

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Dark_Soulsbestgame
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Nice

DeejaeSutherland
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Now I see why most stop reading this story, because the author thought it decent to include in the "I killed this kid by being forcefully shoved into this world" or " I killed this "kid" by being forcefully shoved into this world by taking the body of a kid that did not even exist in the first place" type of plot, but I'll give it tillchapter 10/15 and if the author still brings up the plot of a non-consented transmigration/reincarnation(depending on how the author makes it out to be, seeing how the "boy" didn't exist in the Harry Potter world in the first place, or he makes it out to be that the "boy" was just a boy and he just took it over accidentally and somehow his soul brought along a dragons soul in his accidental transmigration) I'm going to drop the story and put in a low rating and let others know of how the story was.