Great chapter. It was nice to see him reveal something, as well as enjoy it. Looking forward to the genin arc, gonna be interesting with the team selection.

Idk where you're going with the Danzo stuff but honestly I dig the tension. The writing is good as always but maybe tone back on some of the exposition, or make it more concise. The explanations are important but they get kinda long. Thanks for another chapter :)

POV: You are a Man Utd fan.

...its your story bro, appreciate the heads up even if its not ideal.

feels like I should be used to it now, didnt even take reading it halfway before realising nothing was going to happen. this is a great fic, but man its frustrating.

thanks for the chapter

Really enjoying this, don't put pressure on yourself to cram everything in a couple chapters. Not sure how many plot points you still want to cover, or what they are, but maybe try to hit a couple per chapter? short flashbacks for the more minor plot points could also work.

its gonna be interesting to see how mc deals with danzo. I cant really see it going well if he hasnt learned to control his emotions a bit more, but then again it could be the start of the ROOT akira arc, which could also be an interesting way to force him to progress his strength. Lots of options, defintely excited for more.

Idk about whether it was because of the "reincarnated into a child body" thing, but having him lose it after one mention of his family feels a little weak. I do hope that his immaturity and hotheadedness tone down as he gets older, its a little grating having a nara and reincarnated person acting so childish.

thanks for the chapter, love the powers and characters and stuff. Pacing is fine? difficult to tell when the fic is new, but im glad you didnt skip over the academy. Really hoping for some cool stuff with the shadow movement, idk if youve read shadow slave or not but maybe take inspo from that?

this is a cool development, but wouldn’t fiendfyre need a lot of magical power? magical power that riddle doesn’t have, hence the whole possessing and stealing life force thing.

loving this story, cant wait for the cool stuff he makes in the future

doing gods work here author! not enough good solo levelling stories around.

might be a longshot, but transfiguration/animagus stories are some of my favourites. could be a good way to disguise and hide from other supernaturals, hiding his scent by turning into an inconspicuous animal like a cat or owl or smth.

too much imo, hes already the honored one