Comments of chapter undefined of World Of Warcraft: FanFic The Heavenly Star
World Of Warcraft: FanFic The Heavenly Star
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the idea of this novel is good but deep…. character development of MC was insufficient, he spend hundreds thousands of years as something different than human so he can’t be the same happy go lucky dude from the beginning of this ff we expect loneliness, trauma, wisdom, slow transfomation of MCs soul Give him some dignity. Keep up the good work and don’t give up.👍
By the way, this novel also involves music on a certain level and the truth is that I have the tastes of a 50 year old from Latin America... and they are not exactly songs that are to everyone's taste. An example would be Franci de vita, not to say some others that only 80-90 years old people listen to... I accept recommendations of songs of any musical genre to place in the novel, since the protagonist would sing those songs in certain moments. It would also help me to increase the repertoire of songs I listen to...
Another one gone another one gone and another one bites the dust. I guess this will end up dead like 90% of rewrite unless he does the chapter rewrites daly so as to keep focused and not slow down to quiting. Loved your story but till I see a 100 chapters in this won't be back as for the most part no one ever finishes a story they rewrite at most they make it back to the first stopping point and doing a 2nd rewrite that stops half way. For any online none published writing I suggest never rewrite and just start a whole new one as it is hard to motivate to finish without a motivator such as money or contract deadlines. That is when doing similar stuff that you have already wrote. The closest successful rewrite I have seen done was one doing both ends continuing the story while also rewriting the early chapters after they spent 5 years to rewrite their story 3 different time they switched to this style of rewrite on the 4 to keep working and not stop and get bored of their story they have now almost after another 5 years got the early parts rewrote. It should not take you that long as they had about over 300 chapter when they rewrote their story. Another big help is it is their own story and they plan to have it published.
