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2019-07-09 JoinedAndorra
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  • NmNs
    NmNs1yr
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    I think it would be enough if no harem means not spending excessive time lounging with his girls.

    Approaching Yoruichi, Ohta left the dark-skinned woman feeling at a loss for words as he cupped her chin, tracing his thumb along her bottom lip as he said, "Do not fail me..." with a smoldering expression and tone. His words and actions confused her greatly, but she felt equally excited when he released her chin and sauntered past her, slapping her ass and saying, "Let's go." in the same commanding tone.
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    Not a Mob: Psycho
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • NmNs
    NmNs1yr
    Commented

    the idea of this novel is good but deep…. character development of MC was insufficient, he spend hundreds thousands of years as something different than human so he can’t be the same happy go lucky dude from the beginning of this ff we expect loneliness, trauma, wisdom, slow transfomation of MCs soul Give him some dignity. Keep up the good work and don’t give up.👍

    Ch 61 Information
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    World Of Warcraft: FanFic The Heavenly Star
    Video Games · Audio_Coon
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Commented

    skip the whole old gods war please

    Ch 47 Chapter 47
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    World Of Warcraft: FanFic The Heavenly Star
    Video Games · Audio_Coon
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Commented

    This story had a great potential but the character was too OP, there was a lack of strugle. But still, thank you for this great reading. 👍

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    Karna: The Hero of Charity
    Anime & Comics · OmniverseDivine
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Commented

    Try Warhammer 40k chaos clean up

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    The Epic of Leviathan
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Replied to InterPlanarGod

    Everything he has was created through Klyshas power and it could very well be just an illusion which need to be shattered or at least cracked. No one guaranteed him that his happy go lucky OP new life will be real.

    Ch 71 Quick Short Announcement
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    IHAPR V.0
    Video Games · God_Of_Brutality
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Commented

    show Vahn Aldrnari Mason his mortality again and how does it feel to get a setback without being able to flee

    Ch 71 Quick Short Announcement
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    IHAPR V.0
    Video Games · God_Of_Brutality
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Commented

    This cliff is exceptionally brutal. Thank you for the chapter.

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    Karna: The Hero of Charity
    Anime & Comics · OmniverseDivine
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Posted

    This author needs thorough study on on writing how to build a decent story and believable characters without their ridiculous behaviour. Idea us good but there is a lack of preparation. Choose a good writer and try to comprehend and study his style.

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    Supernatural: I am Hades
    TV · Alexmorgan
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Commented

    No chapter?….Shame😂

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    GOJO: A Sorcerer in the Soul Society
    Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Posted

    Story with very good potential. Great need of more chapters for more elaborated review. Don’t give up author.

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    Travelling Through Castlevania As Crowley Eusford
    TV · Mr_Harry_Smith
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Commented

    I can’t wait for baldy Natasha 😅

    Ch 243 Project Natasha (I)...
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    The Epic of Leviathan
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Commented

    give him 2 identities god karna-adult body and adventurer - his actual age body+try to make him accept xenos into his familia

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    Karna: The Hero of Charity
    Anime & Comics · OmniverseDivine
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Commented

    At least the author informed us unlike many others who just disappear. Thank you and I appreciate your hard work.

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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
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    +1

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    The Epic of Leviathan
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Commented

    I dare to say that Karna is truly too OP for both worlds, so if you want to go on with it give him some handicap like temporarily blocked or restrained divinity due to different laws or something. As for my recommendation I would send him to Berserk😁.

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    Karna: The Hero of Charity
    Anime & Comics · OmniverseDivine
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Commented

    magnificent chapter 👍

    Ch 48 Chapter 47
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    Game of Thrones: King Business - Tommen OC/SI
    TV · PathLiar
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  • NmNs
    NmNs2yr
    Commented

    great chapter 👍

    Ch 45 Chapter 44
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    Game of Thrones: King Business - Tommen OC/SI
    TV · PathLiar
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  • NmNs
    NmNs3yr
    Commented

    rinnegan is coming👍

    Ch 71 A Deal
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    In Black Clover With Madaras Powers As Magic
    Anime & Comics · TruePlug
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  • NmNs
    NmNs3yr
    Commented

    send him to berserk world for casca and fairy queen... and to clean the filth😁

    Ch 52 Author's note.
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    Protagonist Killer
    Anime & Comics · Dereck_Oliveira
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