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Comments of chapter undefined of The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.

Filip_Atanasovski
Filip_AtanasovskiLv14Filip_Atanasovski

it was awful and boring, its like you saw all the filler episodes of naruto and said "Yes, this is what people like!", which makes me concerned for your mental state

Filip_Atanasovski
Filip_AtanasovskiLv14Filip_Atanasovski

THIS IS FANFICTION, the world building is done! it has been completed by naruto, if it was a novel i ofc wouldnt have a problem with this kind of chapter but a fanfiction is a different thing!

Sarath7980:This kind of "filler" is what differentiates a story with details from one without, you're talking about a story that has only bones, the bare necessary for the progression, but it's by adding details and variety to the story that it gains meat and blood. Are you one of the guys that likes novels that time skip every non-fighting arc because you just want to see the MC bashing people? You would've really preferred for the story to go from fight with Kakashi to Chuunin exams with absolutely no gap in the middle for world building?

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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv5CouchPotatoDandy

Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂

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Mondou
MondouLv14Mondou

It was a good mission arc in my opinion, loved the mystery, a good change of pace from the training and action
 investigation skills is another aspect of being a ninja and not everything is about fighting

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Nebsan
NebsanLv14Nebsan

thanks for the chapter

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Zero93
Zero93Lv6Zero93

Thanks for chapter

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watzJ
watzJLv4watzJ

Thanks for chapter~

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jasss22
jasss22Lv14jasss22

Thanks for the chapter

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reader12143546
reader12143546Lv10reader12143546

Ty for the chapter author sama.

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Checkban
CheckbanLv1Checkban

Good chapter, and i like this little sttufed

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Xedornox
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Jin_Kazaragi
Jin_KazaragiLv4Jin_Kazaragi

Merci pour le chapitre ! J'ai laissé ma pensée dans le dernier chapitre.

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Sarath7980
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Technophite
TechnophiteLv1Technophite

I mean the fire daimyƍ didnt appear until halfway through shippĆ«den so he might have just died within a few years.

skyhound
skyhoundLv13skyhound

I genuinely enjoyed this mystery case, especially since it's not the usual Dungeon run. I still really like the personality of Mc when he's passionate and having fun.

timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1timeawayfromstress

30 chapters ahead on patreon novel. I can talk about how to use money well ... mc is much more clever and wise than a normal person ... now the stupid decisions are over ? If she is much more intelligent and knowledgeable than a normal person, but acts like a fool ... if she can't decide like a normal person ... uchiha girl you have already forced the incident into the novel, the author. With intelligence and wisdom points, she must be evil mc. Each time the points increase. It's still going on. I'm waiting for the author's reply.

Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv4Kamikaze_Eagle

I found the mission interesting, but lasted a chapter or 2 longer than it should have.