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CouchPotatoDandy

CouchPotatoDandy

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My name is ****** and I like to read science fiction books and watch anime, it's a really fun way to pass time.

2018-03-13 JoinedGlobal
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy14min
    Commented

    It is very complicated to write about a lazy and unmotivated MC and yet still captivate the readers. I hope this fancy can do that.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Cunning Hatake Satoru
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    Naruto : Gojo Satoru Reborn As Kakashi's Brother
    Anime & Comics · Yeye_Qiu
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy29min
    Posted

    I have read some of the fanfic Every Hole is a Goal, but even so I still found myself with a headache while reading the first five chapters. I hate it when a story begin mysteriously with no explanation about things, I tried to understand and even gave this story a chance and read to chapter 5 try and understand what's going on and still failed. That's when I knew I need to drop this and give this fanfic a 1 star review.

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    Paradise of Infinity
    Anime & Comics · FanHarem
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy1h
    Posted

    I guess the first and second chapter were to build the suspense, unfortunately for me it only gave me an headache and I dropped this fanfic. I hate it when authors don't understand that suspense needs to be built throughout the story and not just drop it on the first chapter and act all mysterious.

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    MHA : Shoto Todoroki - Modern-day Villain
    Anime & Comics · Nar_cisse
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy3h
    Posted

    This fanfics started nice, although from the very first chapter I could already spot some plot holes. For example, the MC was born to human parents but he has the Saiyan bloodline with a tail, but for some reason not he's Burns nor the women he slept with asks what the f*ck is going on... This fanfic is in the air for 5 years already, and apparently the author made some adjustments to the earlier chapters and while reading I honestly can't understand some things. He deleted half of the 2nd chapter and in the 9th chapter there was some inside joke that I didn't get since parts of the earlier chapters were deleted.. so take that into account if you are a new reader. Another thing that bothered me is the fact that the MC choose to be a devil in addition to all of his existing powers. For me it's a very illogical decision since even though he will receive magic he would also receive the vulnerability to holy lights magic and holy artifacts. And it's not like he was weak that he needed to be a devil, he was plenty strong without it... After I said all of this, I have only reached chapter 25 before I stopped reading, I hoped the fanfic will get better but the flow of writing felt more like reading a diary then a book so I lost interest and dropped it. So considering the number of chapters available in this fanfic it's possible the author improved greatly in the future, but I wouldn't know.

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    God succession system
    Others · Harry_Dresden
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy5h
    Commented

    I got to say that is one stupid reason to choose the arsonist job, he could have become a senior dragon and became more powerful and it would have a better outcome...

    Ch 12 Church raid
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    God succession system
    Others · Harry_Dresden
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy6h
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, it was excellent and logical, loved it!

    Ch 8 Meeting rias
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    God succession system
    Others · Harry_Dresden
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy6h
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂 I know it's 5 years late but my vote is Issei out and time skip hehe

    Ch 6 Kuoh academy
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    God succession system
    Others · Harry_Dresden
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy7h
    Posted

    I've only read till chapter 6 so I might be wrong, but there is a Harem tag in this fanfic but the author said in the comments of the first chapter that there won't be a Harem in this fanfic.... A lie? I don't know... Besides that there are quite a few grammar mistakes. Many times I have read a sentence and couldn't understand it, I had to read it multiple times before I managed to understand what the author meant to write... Also, the plot for some reason progress exactly as the movie, instead of trying to change it and do it more conveniently, the MC doesn't then do anything!! Let the map to the City of Gold get burned and many other things he knows I'm going to happen and yet doesn't change them. For me seeing all those missed opportunities is too frustrating to continue reading

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    In the movie worlds with my system
    Movies · lucifer_112
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy7h
    Commented

    Why would he let the map get burned when he knows the manager did it on purpose previously in the movie???

    Ch 3 Chapter 3 : Start of plot
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    In the movie worlds with my system
    Movies · lucifer_112
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy8h
    Posted

    I understand this is just a book to practice English but still the plot could have been a lot better. So far I have just reached chapter 7 and I'm already feeling myself becoming stupid and losing brain cells. There is no plot whatsoever, and it's only r18. If one like to read such books, it's fine, but at least make it interesting with some plot in between...

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    My Taboo System
    Anime & Comics · Taboo_lover
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy9h
    Commented

    I thought the maid said his mother is on her way home no?

    The young girl pouted as she complain "mom, I was first. Why did you pull me from brother?"
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    My Taboo System
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy10h
    Replied to Dragon_Slyer161

    How did you get 19 likes on your review? That's what amazes me...

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    My Taboo System
    Anime & Comics · Taboo_lover
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy11h
    Posted

    My take on this fanfic is that the also had great aspirations however executed in badly. The MC got reincarnated and just like all those betta fanfictions, he started acting like a child immediately. Why can't he acts like his age of 20+ year old??? The author tries to explain it as the reasons for his softness is because he was an orphan in his previous lives and now he has a father and mother who loves him. But his juvenile acting and forgetfulness is still an issue for me. So I got to chapter 27 and I couldn't take it anymore and I stopped reading.

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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
    Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy11h
    Commented

    I want everyone to remember that this conversation happens when they are all 7 years olds, okay? So I don't know about you guys but for me I find it way too unbelievable as I read...

    Ch 25 Chapter 25
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy21h
    Commented

    Sounds like Eragon type of magic, love it!

    Ch 7 Chapter 7
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy22h
    Replied to CouchPotatoDandy

    Clotho

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy22h
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    Lachesis

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy22h
    Commented

    So I took the pictures the author published and put them here for you all

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
    Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy1d
    Posted

    I got to say this is definitely one of the best Twilight I think I've ever read, although there are some grammar mistakes here and there and sometimes quite a lot, but the fanfic is still very much understandable so it's okay. I very much enjoyed reading how the MC reincarnated at 4, 000 BC and his adventures for thousands of years. Unfortunately when it got to the year of about 1,000 AD (chapter 56 til chapter 71) werewolves started to get into the picture and the quality of the story dropped fast and sharp that I kinda lost interest. From that point the story progressed at turtle speed and was completely boring. But finally it all ended in one time skip at chapter 71. since then it started to progress at the normal pace of this fanfic and got back to being a good read, in my opinion. Just a shame that there aren't more chapters to read. Anyhow, I rate this fanfic as five stars!

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    The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
    Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy1d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂

    Ch 73 The America's
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    The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
    Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
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