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CouchPotatoDandy

CouchPotatoDandy

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My name is ****** and I like to read science fiction books and watch anime, it's a really fun way to pass time.

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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy33min
    Commented

    In what world a nobody get to speak with the head of the dojo right off the bat? Logically he should have entered and spoke to the receptionist and stated his purpose first...

    Ch 25 Ghost Haunt
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy40min
    Posted

    At the beginning the plot was nice and the storyline was also interesting. However the betta MC and his cowardly and indecisive actions are way too annoying to keep reading this novel. Stabbing a female in the a*s and later also falling on her lap and touching her boo*s and so in, this type of things happened way too much... And his bashful and cowardly actions afterwards are way too annoying to keep reading. Also the MC is constantly bullied and everyone is specifically targeting him for some reasons. I really can't understand those Chinese authors who wrote this kind of novels, do they honestly think readers enjoy reading about MC's getting beaten up and bullied everywhere??? Honestly if the story and plot were bad I wouldn't be so mad but I kinda enjoyed the novel and it's just the MC and he's cowardly and illogical actions that totally ruined it for me! I could only greet my teeth and read till chapter 50 before dropping it.

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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy55min
    Commented

    Let's imagine a scene, the Son of Heaven and his gang hire 50 thugs as help and go out into the wild but when they're back there are no thugs at all coming back with them, next time they try to hire more thugs would anyone volunteer and take up the money??? But since this novel is without any logic I guess the author didn't even think about it...

    Ch 22 Broken Egg
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy1d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂 Hope the Universe won't start throwing heroes and villains at them just because...

    Ch 52 The accident escalates
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy1d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂 Shame about those missing parts of the 'third point of view' but no matter.

    Ch 49 Flashsteps
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy1d
    Posted

    The first 150 chapters were really good, but from there things started to go downhill. For example the translation quality was deteriorating, many times I couldn't understand if a person was a male or female cuz sometimes he/she was addressed as a 'he' and later down the chapter as a 'she'.... Even the chapter that describe the world background wasn't understandable as many areas were not properly described or their locations... Another major issue in this novel was that the author after chapter 200 started to make the MC's senior brothers or other powerful cultivators as the MC side characters, many times the MC did certain things in front of powerful seniors in his sect that weren't under his responsibility or authority to do, and no one said anything (like taking out captives they caught in a major war, without explaining anything to anyone). Even many things and issues about the MC cultivation method (he uses the Liquor Fire Spiritual Qi cultivation method he stole from a major sect, yet no one noticed his unique qi at all...) or his treasures (no matter what, people would still be interested in knowing where he got such a high level treasure...), they didn't ask him anything about them! Which is completely illogical! There are many small problems like this throughout the novel (for example there wasn't any explanation about the cultivation system levels or the ranking of various treasures, only while reading further one can deduce the levels based on the advancement of the MC, it was as if the author thought we all already knew what was in his mind and should know the cultivation levels already...) I know all these things may seem small but when they're added up to one another they start to make this novel uninteresting as I became less invested in it due to all the illogical things happening... And lastly, as I reached chapter 700 it became more and more clear that if one doesn't understand Chinese Mythology then reading this novel is seriously hard... The author many times mentioned many things, events or people from Chinese Mythology (which I honestly couldn't understand much) and it was quite a bummer. Eventually the more I read the more I understood that it wasn't just the author fault for making this novel turn bad, but also the fault lay in the translation that was getting worse and worse and making this novel progressively illogical and confusing! Eventually it's all came up to chapter 904 where it was plain obvious that the last 10 chapters in this novel were very rushed and the ending wasn't satisfying at all, leaving a bitter taste in the mouth. So I give a 4 star review not cuz it was an excellent novel, but because I can say I still somewhat enjoyed reading it.

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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy3d
    Commented

    For some reason I got a sense of relief washing over me when I read that the hypocrite Master Rhino died🤣

    Ch 48 Inevitable
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy5d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂 Although I kinda didn't like how the last seven chapters went, too many plot holes and illogical events taking place...

    Ch 47 News spread
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy5d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂 Kind of a bummer about the conclusion Rhino Master got though.

    Ch 46 Aftermath
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy7d
    Commented

    So in the end he still let Shan escape and fought uselessly against those masters, seems kind of pointless...

    Ch 45 To the East
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy7d
    Commented

    He could have ended this entire fight right at the beginning, when he attacked the five masters simultaneously with Shunpo he should have also used his Qi to bypass their armor and hit their inside.

    Ch 44 Despair
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy8d
    Replied to EternalEden

    Exactly! I just hope that after all the fighting and him beating their as* the author will make them understand they were wrong... It would be way too forced to make them think they are still right after seeing all the bodies on the ground and the strange weapons in the buildings. If after all this there are still rumors going around the world of Tai Lung attacking innocent people and burning down buildings then it would really be a disappointment.

    Ch 43 The audacity of the weak
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy8d
    Commented

    After Tai Lung beat them down, he should explain why he burned down the place and how that noble who owned the place planned an attack on the city with Shen, afterwards he needs to break an arm and a leg to each of those masters as a punishment for attacking before asking questions!!

    Ch 43 The audacity of the weak
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy8d
    Posted

    (Writing this at chapter 43) So far this is a very good fanfic of Kung Fu Panda. I very much enjoy reading this fanfic as the plot is good so far. The grammar is without any problems, which is something I consider a must when reading. All in all, highly recommended to anyone who likes this gender.

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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy8d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂

    Ch 43 The audacity of the weak
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy9d
    Commented

    I don't think you have portrayed his character wrongly, I do think you made him seem weaker than he is actually supposed to be...

    Ch 11 Guardian of Mielin City
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy11d
    Commented

    Does the Evil Eye High Priest in the Asura world doesn't feel it is strange how an altar that opened the space tunnel between the two worlds suddenly appear? I mean if something so good just fell out of the sky so suddenly ,it is quite obvious it is a trap...

    Ch 318 Rock Mountain Range's Holy Land
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy11d
    Commented

    Does the Evil Eye High Priest in the Asura world doesn't feel it is strange how an altar that opened the space tunnel between the two worlds suddenly appear? I mean if something so good just fell out of the sky so suddenly ,it is quite obvious it is a trap...

    Ch 317 Benefiting from "Disaster"
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    Cultivation! My Augmented Statuses Have Unlimited Duration
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy11d
    Commented

    Does the Evil Eye High Priest in the Asura world doesn't feel it is strange how an altar that opened the space tunnel between the two worlds suddenly appear? I mean if something so good just fell out of the sky so suddenly ,it is quite obvious it is a trap...

    Ch 316 Asura Beast Tide, Non-Peaceful Resolution
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    Cultivation! My Augmented Statuses Have Unlimited Duration
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  • CouchPotatoDandy
    CouchPotatoDandy11d
    Replied to shambe

    That is my point exactly, even if a person is interested in a certain woman and she rejected him he wouldn't start crying like that... It is too unrealistic!

    Ch 80 *Round two*
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