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Comments of chapter undefined of The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)

Cap_Gidra
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What about Dane, son of the Sword of Dawn?

TheSystemFan
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No man I really don't want another cliche North lord's son. There are other kingdoms but most of the fanfics mc's are born or transmigrated in some northern lord or his son.

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Slxxpy
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Yay!

CopyPaste1
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pff again North? 90 % of the fics out there is of the North. ok he will be a Bolton..then what? will he go kingdom building or he will just make money for.his land and fight WITH the North? and if he go kingdom building how is he gonna rule the North when all support Starks? Is he gonna kill them all? or is he gonna marry Sansa the useless girl who think is above all? You can make him whatever you want I just wanna be realistic He will not have the money...he will not have huge armies and he will not have the trust of almost all the north lords plus a killer as a father who wanna rule. The problem is what is the end goal for the game of thrones world..Lord? king? emperor? or just to marry and make his lands rich! He can be elder brother of arianne and be a sand..he will go to wars to avenge Ellia and take the throne in the end Or He can be son of mace of tyrrels and marry myrcela and be king again somehow after the chaos Again all come down at what is your end goal

Lunarian_King
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about 14 chapter and TWD arc ends, my heart is aching already even thought I know he will come back to TWD in the future. I say don't choose the route of a Lord from Westeros, especially a North Lord which is overused; in my opinion being a Free Commoner in Essos is a unique start, a story about a nobody becoming a King would be a historical story for generations to come. a kid who was a nobody slowly but surly start to expand his wings and fly until he reach an untouchable height, probably form a group of friends in one of the free cities, work together to earn thier living and save money for the future while also training to prepare themselves to achieve their first goal of making a Sellsword company that give more importance to Quality over Quantity, introduce new strategies and battle formation, take on small contracts at first like dealing with small groups of Dothoraki and probably some minor assassinations, while also try to build a sub-company for spy-network/information gathering/assassination (assassin creed style), also introduce superior ships, and weapons 'no firearms or anything that use gunpowder', warmachines,. . . its bound that Dany gonna learn about him and his famous company along with their feats and try to recuit them, althought I'd say they should at first form an alliance with a common goal before they merge their forces in the future with him joining her ranks probably as the General of her Armies, and part of her council. I'd also like to suggest probably be offered to him by Viserys in exchange for his company's help to invade Westeros althought Viserys would later try to break their marriage by secretly offering her to a Khal Drogo to get his Dothraki Army, but his plan fail and MC manage to slay both Khal Drogo and Viserys and then Dany uses thier corpses to hatch the dragon eggs, and MC win the dothoraki army's recognition by defeating Drogo in 1v1 battle, like this they will earn a big army of untrained savages beside his own army, and they could later form an army of unsullied and have his company soldiers supervise their training while conqueroring the free cities while also recuiting more men in their army, cuz they will leave for westeros after conqueroring Essos. which means they needs enough soldiers to take care of the free cities while they are conqueroring Westeros...

SkyNeves
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First of all, thanks for the chapter author. Now about the GOT world, will he transmigrate as a grown man(like age he will be on the latest chapter) or will he regress to the age he was when he appeared on TWD world? There's lots of things to consider for an opinion such as location, current situation, goals, romantic partner, and so on. LOCATION: Essos, the land of the free... and the slaves. -Why? He'd be free of any binding such as houses, lands (north is united, south is each to their own) and he could either live out well as a merchant or build a name for himself, or try to find a way to go to the seven kingdoms (making the plot develop more with him trying to find a way with no money). CURRENT SITUATION: Commoner. -Why? His system makes challenges and sure as a lord he'd have challenges but commoners have more since there's more struggle plus he could always gain nobility and valor. Goals: Yep this one's on you author. -Will he want to become a knight? A merchant? a Khal? A Lord? A King? An Emperor? There a lot of things he could be but some of them will made his choices set to stone. I'll show what I think at the end. ROMANTIC PARTNER: In the GOT universe multiple lovers is a thing but not multiple partners (as in official partners), that is... In the seven kingdoms, and why Essos is ideal if you feel whimsical (I could really care less about #harem or #noharem I just want a good action to romance balance). MY OPINION: I honestly think Essos is a good place to start, not for a normal person obviously but for Xenon who has already got some skills(that is if he can travel to other worlds with them if they are compatible). He'd be a commoner since that way he could choose what he wants to be or the situation could make the choice for him (people trying to make him a slave or unsullied could spice things up). The North is a good place but that's only for someone who wants to lay low for awhile because when winter comes it attacks the north first. He could build a name for himself with his skills and with the swordsmanship he'll learn making him a powerful foe to all facing him and will make him a reputation. Later he could meet Daenerys (I'm picturing her as a love interest since his end goal isn't set to stone) and he could become her sword, and after some mushy or intense moments they'd get close and possibly become a couple. Then you have two choices, either make them go to the seven kingdoms and take over which will end up with them having to face the white walkers or they could build a kingdom in Essos, which could lead to them controlling the seven kingdoms money through the iron bank, and later on they'd invade the seven kingdoms and make an Empire, and the seven kingdoms would become bigger and would be two continents united under their rule. wow I wrote a lot😅.

Herb_6573
Herb_6573Lv4Herb_6573

why does he have to be reborn or whatever would he lose all of his skills

Evangal
EvangalLv11Evangal

What about straight up nothing to his name? Seeing him go from rags to riches would be entertaining. Climbing his way up to eventually build his own house or to become king despite all the resistance that would cause,especially since he's a "commoner"

Newnoob
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How bout an Greyjoy. Ever seen one become one. Or how bout he becomes the son of Kevin lannister. He can than become the heir to tywin as he hates tyrion and Jaime is kingsguard. So that leaves his brothers blood. Kevin is tywins right hand man. So Kevin's son is like his son.

TehStorm
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Nice chapter.

TabooExistence
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thx

MagicSand
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Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

killerking59
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Merci pour le chapitre 😁 👍

Just_another_guy
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if OC a free sworman like syrio forel he can be the master of arya or a spy of illiryo who secretly helps daenerys to scape of drogos wedding stealing the eggs other characters are the 2nd Forester, gendry, viserys, F-aegon, podrik horse ****.

DandeLion
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123r97
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I think it would be more interesting if he was just a random commoner within the north. People could rally behind him as the common people's superman or something as he pushes through and proves himself more and more. People would make rumors about him being related to the starks or to the Targaryens because he's as strong as a dragon in such a small form. He might be hired by someone important making him a lessor noble with land then he earns himself more and more achievements. I think it would just be more interesting than starting a stark like most fanfiction.

Roshaan
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thx

Natanael486
Natanael486Lv4Natanael486

Thanks for the chapter

N0_Hope
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[Second coment] Up to this point this story is a 11/10 . A bit short but I can understand , still the quality never fails . I barely know anything about game of thrones but I know the main waifu ( queen of dragons ) she is fking hot and if the mc can bring guns from the earth with enough space he could help her and she could help him..... Just imagine another blond waifu in a threesome with the MC and Amy.... Also he could get access to dragons and basically have an army given enough time. If the mc can go through the 2 worlds every ... let's say every 24 hours then he could use modern technology and even the gold that is now in the banks to get power in the medieval world. I believe they have some sort of magic whihc the MC could try to learn... he could get the extra boost of power he will need for more dangerous worlds. ... Conclusion : thanks author for such mastepice.

ali_seifi
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Thanks for the chapter, but how are you going to round up the entire TWD world arc in 10 chapters ? and i dont mean how you do it rather what will you do to finish it ?

xNoReadNoLifex
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Merci