Just_another_guy
of reading
6178
Read books
It is a Chinese novel with slight changes. Within what MTL can offer is the typical invincible system flow. I don't appreciate that you haven't said it expressly and given at least the original name. I know that writing is difficult but you don't have to be too opportunistic. Regarding the modifications, the elimination of constant cultural references is appreciated, I hate it when inappropriate comments break the sense of substitution, the fewer references to a previous life the better. For your part, the subtle changes in Wanda from being a former Chinese worker to a former Venezuelan teenage girl barely affect her subsequent actions in general. Therefore in both cases they are superfluous.
SPOILERS Honestly, the game development part doesn't seem like a good fit. I'm not very involved in that world, but it doesn't seem to add depth to the story, I understand why a Peter Parker would use lol and angry birds to make money, but with Bruce Wayne it seems unnecessary to spend so much time on it, not just what he says he works daily, lacking time before having the clone, but rather the number of chapters. As a reader, I encourage all writers to explore and have fun according to their interests, but I detect two problems. - the whole Japanese company part doesn't really add up to the story except for the genius boy, at least if you don't know all the references. - in the world of DC, creating immersive VR technology will at best make SAO look like child's play, with so many villains, gods and aliens it does not seem advisable to connect all brains to machines.
The problem with mixing Marvel and DC is that many characters and events already have someone similar so they become redundant. I have only seen a couple of occasions in which Vien is handled but all the added elements make it more difficult to coordinate the actions. interactions. Depending on how deep you are in the lore it will be more or less annoying, but above all it is that taking the character out of his environment seems unnatural, the most typical is "Naruto in **some world**" where a Gary Stu version of naruto (or worse betrayed and edgy) cannot justify how being the original naruto and not a self insert he can act appropriately with the right characters at the right time, the good thing about the oc insert is that they justify the out of place actions of the main character
591 / 5.000 Resultados de traducción Resultado de traducción Just watching the show, I had always understood that the central infinite curve is not a real thing, it is a limitation that the ricks put on their portal guns that only c-137 and evil rick built themselves from scratch. It's like when you put a label in a results filter, the label in this case is "rick is the smartest", Doofus Rick could be a necessary exception to calibrate his device or his loss of acquired intelligence deceives the "search filter" , perhaps in series like Rick and Morti the comics are only canon as long as they do not contradict what is seen on TV. but good work[img=recommend]
that was *1024 any 10 days 1024 ^ 365 or 2 ^3650
this could be a bether explication for the talent of the original rudy than laplace factor
the laplace factor was a bad decision of the original author, rudy must be only a baby whit an adult mind. that used to do him more interesting than other cheater protagonist at the same perioid.
In my opinion there are too many authors who guard their paid content with too much suspicion, 1 month of advantage for weekly chapters usually compensates better than blocking from a certain chapter. You write well but today the payment model is very poorly balanced in terms of cost and performance from the consumer's point of view. I don't know how many views you need to make it profitable for you to write. It depends on your personal situation, but as a general rule the works Without follow-up they lose attention very quickly. I know I'm not impartial because I'm not planning on going to Patreon or something similar, but I had forgotten about this story like so many others and I know that there are many people who don't even read works that are not frequently updated or with a few dozen chapters.
Merlyn does not create the phoenix force and i always think thath merlyn is not truely a He is not a reliable narrator and on many occasions seems very vulnerable. My personal theory is that Merlyn fused or eliminated the variants of him to become more powerful. no matter how much he claims to be the omniversal guardian. Neither he nor the cap uk corps have shown such power
Sentry serum is not a pure biological medicine, it depend of some extradimensional energy. other serums only work and no more explaining, You had pure Dionesium under batcabe. but must have careful about the METAL ritual
The support is an unnecessary addition, the only use is to make Jojo different from other similar anime. In my opinion, Hunterxhunter's nem is more appropriate. but I am not talking about the advanced uses, only the basic ones: Ten, Zetsu, Ren and Hatsu. What I mean is that some aspects of power systems are only aesthetic. but in my experience, the best fanfictions limit the story to the internal rules, system, and characters of the original world-building. (DC multiverse) The reason is that fanfiction writers can be good but when they create a second OC feel void is that we are filling our mental image with cannon information and they can omit a lot of explanations.
zatana was part of Batman girls
it is very likely that if you break the ecological chain of the soil biota, this soil will lose a lot of fertility, it is also difficult to reach a satisfactory consistency, it can result in a lot of erosion with the first big rain
Rhaella, viserys and jaime stay in redkeep
Bee-drones like queen bee in Arrowverse
he understand, not like yoda
no, that whas a spider colony who eat full body of peter parker, not a peter bitten
please don't leave her be his "uncle Ben", is a Reincarnator, he must be able to know that when spidey is selfish his life will go to trash. Anyone can hate more spidey that guionist, please be the bether man, don't fall in dark side of edgy drama please