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Comments of chapter undefined of Multiverse of Marvel

Yukiyo_Yuri
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thanks for the chapters[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

Xeno_Xcalius
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bring goku , anos , saitama , rimuru .. everything will be solved completely 😂

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DaoistDIecWZ
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Let john bring brainiac an AI much more powerful than ultron and chase it until it is destroyed

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dukroger
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Honestly, all these chapters were kind of forced, like every item or subject invoked is to have some protection, especially ships and other mechanical things that in addition to being invoked were still transformed into living beings by the mc's cube, that is, it was to have double protection, the fact that these things were still dominated by a being like ultron, sets a terrible precedent, as I said in a previous comment, if a simple ultron, simple compared to certain beings, can do all this with summoned things and still modified by other summoned items, so isn't that too absurd? I make these remarks as a constructive criticism and concern for the story, I hope the author friend understands and doesn't take it as something to put him down or anything like that, anyway luck with the continuation of the story and blessings.

Rusty_noddle12
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If ultron can take beings from the system, does that mean that if John brought powerful people from other shows, they would know when he checks their memories and that they have been changed by the system? And can powerful entities brake in to Naruto and the other sub dimensions? Just wondering.

Growl_16
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You know i really want to know marvel people reaction when they watch anime dragon ball super, Zalama,god of destruction and zeno power is to OP And when zalama appear is epic for me. Oh and bring anime dxd too, just want to read odin reaction how he react to his counterpart must be humiliating 😂😂😂

MagiSimba
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Honestly I got discouraged, things are very fast and without "emotion" so to speak, by emotion I mean real difficulties, beings that forced them to almost death or destruction, just like thanos in the movies where you put despair in the avengers and in those times make chapters more long please to give us an ''immersion'' where we feel what they are going through, how much they are suffering to win, to feel their emotions, I find the story interesting and the idea wonderful, so far it's not bad but I do this criticism because I believe it can reach a much higher level than that. And please don't make endings so ''abrupt'' where they are fighting and out of nowhere they won, I think it's missing ''details'' I think your style is making the story go too fast where if it was slower it would be better because you could give more details and give us an ''immersion'''. I make this review because I really like this story, where characters from other universes can interact with each other and fight together, so I would like it to reach its maximum potential so to speak.

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DaoistDIecWZ
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At some point john will bring in some cosmic entity such as anti-monitor, the wraith, imperiex, the darkest knight or something lesser like Doctor Manhattan to handle the problem posed by the celestials, gods like knull or the beyonders

SCP_UnKnown
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Thank you…

Sali_sani
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nephilim101
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lol i cought up. good work as always.

GodOfMultiverse
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Author, I want to ask if you will bring the Amazons to Marvel.

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GodOfMultiverse
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How much do they want to bet that Ultron becomes Marvel's Brainiac!

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Sali_sani
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Your novel is great author, I love it so much, keep working hard * Google Translate

Pendora10
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to be honest you only need to use dragon balls to take ultron 🤣

Iinchou
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Thanks for the chapter

Armando_Almeyda
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Trae a rimuru, bleach para acabar con enemigos de alma, James heler de prototype, al papi Doom Slayer para pelear jajaj será una masacre jajaj

Thoth0
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poor ultron

Alexei_4521
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I realized that there are two types of comments on this story, those from people who don't like me anymore and those who don't like me anymore but keep telling the author that his novel is good simply because they don't have anything else to read and they don't want the author to abandon the novel

Wolfiey
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thanks for the chapter