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MagiSimba10mthCommentedCh 15 Childhood friend: Seth Kang- MagiSimba1yrCommentedCh 172 The Slime Abomination’s New Form
- MagiSimba1yrCommentedCh 54 Chapter 54 – Victory of the Olympians: The Birth of a Monster!
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2. I sum up this fight and give brief descriptions of future fights. The only exception is truly major fights like when Wesley finally fights the bat family. This will make it much easier on me and therefore more chapters for you. - MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 86 Burning Will
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Honestly I got discouraged, things are very fast and without "emotion" so to speak, by emotion I mean real difficulties, beings that forced them to almost death or destruction, just like thanos in the movies where you put despair in the avengers and in those times make chapters more long please to give us an ''immersion'' where we feel what they are going through, how much they are suffering to win, to feel their emotions, I find the story interesting and the idea wonderful, so far it's not bad but I do this criticism because I believe it can reach a much higher level than that. And please don't make endings so ''abrupt'' where they are fighting and out of nowhere they won, I think it's missing ''details'' I think your style is making the story go too fast where if it was slower it would be better because you could give more details and give us an ''immersion'''. I make this review because I really like this story, where characters from other universes can interact with each other and fight together, so I would like it to reach its maximum potential so to speak.
Ch 222 Aftermath - MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 60 Chapter 60
- MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 162 Traveling
- MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 8 Betrayal & Despair
- MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 18 Chapter 18 - The Maze of the Two Kings (2)detailTower of God: Opening the Door to the Dawn of the Age of Chaos [HiatusAnime & Comics · Zarathos_Lirbyther
- MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 36 Chapter 36 – Waking Enlil… Was NOT a good idea.
- MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 161 Mars
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This book has been deleted. - MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 71 The Crystal Dragon King’s Enlightened Form
- MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 6 Blizzard & Footprints
- MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 151 Justice
- MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 16 Chapter 16 - What is that Between his Legs?detailTower of God: Opening the Door to the Dawn of the Age of Chaos [HiatusAnime & Comics · Zarathos_Lirbyther
- MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 70 Chapter 70- It’s Beautiful
- MagiSimba2yrCommentedCh 146 New fan values