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The story is a great read that has a rather bittersweet ending. I enjoyed how the MC developed, you can see which aspect of the character was developed by who or what if you take some time to think about it. During the making of the story, updates were no less than 10 a week when I started reading this so it really helped keeping in the loop of the story. All round would recommend reading this.

Thanks for the chapters, very Plus Ultra👍👍🤌👍

Eh 😑 it is what it is.😮‍💨😅

Noice

Hi, I Just started reading today and forgot how to stop until I was forced by find no more chapters.👍👍

Grass

You want vile not vial. One is synonymous with foul and unpleasant etc. while the other is a small most commonly cylindrical container.

I was driving home and had Spotify on random music playing, and a song that would have fit perfectly for the theme of the album played. The song is called Hope by NF, gave me the chills when I listened to it, give the song a try if you haven't already listened to it.

Honestly, I don't think there is a need to have any other girl. You have already shown that there is a way for Zen to keep up.

Right, thanks for the reply.

This should technically be canceled out by powerful mind as the chance is 15% which means there is an 85% like that it won't happen, and as it affects the mind, 50% of 85 is 42.5. So 85 + 42.5= 127.5% chance of him not being quick to anger or -27.5% chance to anger. But I could be totally wrong.

Ah thank you, seems my country really does have an extra 2 years.

I might be wrong about the ages and stuff as those are just guesses based on the age of student in my country that from rumors I heard around school had a pointless extra 2 years for reasons I didn't bother to find out.

I meant your introduction of Nejire, she should be between 3 to 5 years older than Momo so it just felt I little forced... ya know? I'm not actually sure of the age gap between the main cast and the Big three and am guessing that the big three were nearing their last year or two making them about 17 to 18 years old, while the main cast was 12 turning 13 or already 13 maybe even 14 years old at the start of MHA.

Author is very heavy handed in introducing changes to the Canon narrative to better suit your needs.

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Was the wording on purpose? Because "God sent to me" and "God sent me to" have obviously different meanings about the MCs personality.

Never watched Neverending story? Spirited away? Digimon?

Honestly, I can't finish the third chapter. The story keeps switching from first person POV to third person POV, I didn't mind it at first because it was in separate paragraphs, but then it started happen anywhere and I was quickly becoming frustrated with reading it. Another point that I was becoming annoyed with was, after someone spoke it ended with "said rudely (name)", it would be better if the order was "(name) said rudely" and then a thesaurus could be used to find words to use besides just said.