Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
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The only special thing about the mc comes from his system. His personality just seems meh, he is supposed to be smart and low key, but he just comes across as overly cautious and meek to a fault. Idk if it’s just slow build up, but he has been hiding the entire story. The system is what makes the mc do stuff, its what drives the story, without it, the mc would still just be some cowardly hollow following his sister around, if he even became a hollow. All I’m saying is he doesn’t seem to do anything other than what the system tells him, or makes him do. And he doesn’t seem to have any cool/strong/positive qualities that wasn’t given to him by his system. He doesn’t seem to enjoy fighting, he doesn’t seem to want to do anything special? He is just there being strung along by his system and somehow everything just works out? Plot armor shouldn’t be the major reason for his continued survival. The story is good I enjoy reading it, but maybe you could make the mc more of a person, because he seems pretty hollow to me.
Thanks for the chapter! Insect man don't know his place apparently. U be outnumbered like 7 to 1 and it takes a extra to make 8 for you to say "yea that's one body builder too many".... Information is the most important part of warfare and insect man sucks at it. Nice chapter. I needs me some action or better, evolution, thou. "Must.... Have.... Patience...!"