Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel : Different Peter Parker

this whole chapter is cliche and cringey .

your English is terrible please work on it

The MC should be suspicious when listening to the fact that the god prefers that he suffers (the MC) just so that there is balance hahahahaha .. all for the common good ... xD [img=exp][img=exp]

soo we get a stupid goodie hero complex mc who will have complexes because of a a mildly tragic past?

These chapters need editing.

author can study more about grammar from the comments

What do you mean " with a ho like to do party "?

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Keep going please 🤩👌

i don't know that some writers choose mc to replace or equivalent to 'OAA'... well, they are basically heretics.... by the way, i made a novel (in Indonesian on wattpad) with mc who is a reincarnator + kryptonian and inheriting a Celestial (I don't know if a Celestial's power can be inherited or not.) is that a heresy? because I think Celestial itself is just a cosmic entity under 'OAA'

some serious editing is needed, I suggest you check the coments on the paragraphs for some corrections, good luck with this story.

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Working on it.😃

No, you have to read the next chapter to know who he will be.

Uh, truck_kun + god_kun, what an old fashioned crossing

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Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thanks for the chapter