My Daughter is too Cute
Looking past the fact that the story was rushed for the last 30 chapters or so, I would rate this book pretty highly. There were many times I laughed out loud from the humor of the story. And the sorry itself had a great development and the characters were likeable. Now if the sorry wasn't rushed and continued for maybe 200-400 chapters longer it would've been more reasonable. As to develop the universe and Su Wen's power. Since there were many other powerful world creators out there this could've been developed better as a story. Besides this flaw the story was great and thank you for doing such a good jus translating!
Wow what a rushed ending. The author seems like they just got tired of this book tbh. This book had some cool action and a lot of comedy, but it's definitely not perfect. Besides the rushed ending, the most disappointing thing is that Yan Luoying was such a minor character despite her being the title of the novel. Should have named this novel Vermilion Bird Bloodline or Emotional Outrage System or something else more accurate. The author has talent, for sure. The novel was fun. But rn I'm left disappointed. Hopefully they can write a more cohesive work next time around.
that was a great journey and although the ending seems rushed the novel realy had more emphasis on comedy , slice of life and power dynamic ( like court struggles ) than a pure cultivation so even if author created a more expansive world out there with higher cultivation realms it wouldn't be the same since vast mojority of characters wouldn't be able to keep up with mc cultivation speed and eventually become irrelevant to the story which works for normal wuxia/xianxia but here the novel would just lose it's charm
am i the only one glad su wen didn't kill the zhou emperor and the dude was still friends with su wen's dad? this was a great read, despite the obvious rushed ending, i only complaim that it ended, not that it was rushed, all other novels have rushed endings so it's normal to me ( i haven't read a non-rushed ending ever since ISSTH and WMW) anyway, i loved this book a lot!