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Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars: The Path To Ascension

Edge_Grayard8_Lord
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With the Dna resequencer will he give himself powers, genetic powers i mean. Kinda of like if it was natural like in this one novel with the nqme that is something along the lines of alien evolution, there is an alien that breathes out fire through a chemical reaction, obvioaly not exactly like that but similar.

Edge_Grayard8_Lord
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Also please dont make this a big faction building novel, just a small group(5-15), or a medium size crew, please or atkeast consider it

America_Yea
America_YeaLv3America_Yea

Meh what's the point of a sw charachter if they don't have the force powers that are the main draw of starwars. I'll give it a few chapters but I feel that this is a waste of my time already.

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xKiNgxSaMx
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I may not know anything about star trek or star gate but after reading the descriptions and seeing the pictures of each wish i can honestly say that this story has me excited. While I don't hate mc that reincarnate with strong force abilities( if they are done correctly ), I find characters like the one your making in this story very interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this author. Also cant wait for you to start your other stories back up because i really like them

tear_drop
tear_dropLv15tear_drop

aaand im out. I know this is a fanfic and it 100% reflects the authors preference so this is not meant as a personal attack. I just cant understand the appeal of projecting ur self in a fictional universe without being able to use its unique Power system that differentiates it from other scifi universes/Storys. its like being in the Avatar without bending or in Harry Potter without magic. You can be smart or an engineer in every setting so whats the point of it being in Star wars and not in idk Rick and morty.

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Aquatic_camel
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Looking forward to this , since most of the Star Wars fics here are harems or with some MC that is the embodiment of the force. I always liked the lifestyle of Han Solo with adventures and exploring what the universe offers instead of the mess that is the Jedi and Sith. You got something special here Water bear and I can't wait to read it❤️

cheeki_breeki
cheeki_breekiLv13cheeki_breeki

whats the point in going star wars if u dont even have powers

CaptainBoyHole
CaptainBoyHoleLv13CaptainBoyHole

haha look at all the babies crying about no force power.

Shuten
ShutenLv13Shuten

almost as idiotic as making an fanfiction crossover like (example) having Naruto be mc him going into the fairy tail world but then taking away his chakra and memories

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Deisy_Marin
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Dido_Oscar
Dido_OscarLv4Dido_Oscar

nice

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Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

Good star, i hope you continue this.

Brian70707
Brian70707Lv14Brian70707

Best star wars fan fic I read was Roger roger. Unfortunately author quit so will you due to the nature of the abilities you gave your mc Reason other authors have their mc as force sensitive is due to it being easier to describe lightsaber duels and battlefields than it is the depths of mechanics and genetics

Bruscar
BruscarLv10Bruscar

a ship that I would have asked for would be the andromeda from starblazers.

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Brezer
BrezerLv14Brezer

great start

Mead_Me
Mead_MeLv14Mead_Me

I'll admit, not having force powers initially put me off. But now I'm really interested in his choices. There are some enemies that would be really hard to counter without the force, so I'm interested in how he manages.

ChaosFeedz
ChaosFeedzLv3ChaosFeedz

first time i've heard of warhammer being refered to as a "peacefull utopia" lol

closeranemone48
closeranemone48Lv13closeranemone48

Interesting

Demonzor
DemonzorLv14Demonzor

Feel Like the ships where a waste of points

MistofOblivion
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Thanks for the chapter 💖