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Comments of chapter undefined of Cosmic Peak

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Cosmic Peak

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Chapter comments8

AbysallNight
AbysallNightLv14AbysallNight

Grammar is bad, Sentence structures are lacking along with the speeches structural patterns, look to improve those as it would help. Otherwise its a decent concept.

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GrassHopperSensei
GrassHopperSenseiLv1GrassHopperSensei

????

2yr

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Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

if Quinn is the female lead author needs to do more work, their relationship don't give any substance, and Quinn don't give me anything that can make her likeable. Thanks for the chapter! Much Love~

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DaoistJow
DaoistJowLv13DaoistJow

Thanks for the chapter.

2yr
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GamingRebels
GamingRebelsLv11GamingRebels

What about collecting bodies of animals killed for food or money so many missed opportunities in the the story?

1yr
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Kido_TO
Kido_TOLv4Kido_TO

He should have sold every organs and all kidneys of his, he would have got more money and recovered to perfect condition

2yr
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Brezer
BrezerLv14Brezer

when did he buy a new phone

1yr
Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thanks for the chap

1yr
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