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Comments of chapter undefined of Magus of the Wizarding World

Arduril
ArdurilLv3Arduril

I recommend reading your last two chapters, deleting this one and rewriting it. I'm fairly sure there was some sort of logic conflict here, as it made little sense.

Authorsan
AuthorsanLv3Authorsan

dude let him interact with others more he looks like a one dimensional character with no personality

Genist
GenistLv4Genist

Bruh, efficient pathways, higher speed, etc is literally what IQ means.

OzTheWizard_24
OzTheWizard_24Lv1OzTheWizard_24

There can't be a HP fanfiction if MC doesn't fight the troll🙄

Sakra95
Sakra95Lv2Sakra95

Sorry but this is too cliche.

SwordGod007
SwordGod007Lv5SwordGod007

great chapter but the story needs a little more character interaction

WOL1F
WOL1FLv13WOL1F

Any news about stark industry Rand oscorb or even cap I hope more of the marvel world its focusing on HP a lot at least in holiday's he focuses on something marvel related[Keep the good work UP]

Yui_Sealfat
Yui_SealfatLv3Yui_Sealfat

Thank for good chapter.

Avarath123
Avarath123Lv4Avarath123

No consistency. He applied the 3rd and final level of the occlumency spell in the previous chapter but now it turns out it was the 2nd level. Not to mention, the 2nd level was originally applied in the previous school term back in May, and each level was only supposed to last 2 months or less. He had to reapply the spell in the summer due to his maturation but his progress was not lost. Honestly, he should’ve already been done with the spell by September but the author had him first applying they 3rd level in a secret corridor but now we find out it was the 2nd level…again.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

RogueCrescent
RogueCrescentLv14RogueCrescent

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IronM
IronMLv4IronM

That's what iq is, faster processing speed,the ability to take information in faster, processing it. i guess the author iq is not high. If not, he could've process what he just wrote

Devil023
Devil023Lv4Devil023

nice development so far

Valadonchik
ValadonchikLv1Valadonchik

Что-то не так Нелогично Как будто другая книга Такую тупую ошибку гг допустил

FAMHDTVPNG
FAMHDTVPNGLv3FAMHDTVPNG

thanks for the chapter

Von_Krieg
Von_KriegLv6Von_Krieg

Thanks for the chapter

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Grymwing
GrymwingLv5Grymwing

Thanks for the chapter.

Artdt
ArtdtLv5Artdt

Thanks for the chapter