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Avarath12313dCommentedHe agreed to the deal and was happy about it when it was struck.
The gall of this people. My work! My invention! My blood! They dare try to regulate what I do with my products.- Avarath12317dCommentedCh 5 A Small Ray of Hope
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So that everyone dies if something goes wrong. 👍🏻
"I'm about to start it. I want everyone to witness it," Peter said with a serious expression. - Avarath1231mthCommented
Well if it’s causing him this much trouble, then it looks like Tony Stark is truly are than him. He got the design down in a flash of inspiration . Also, two suns orbiting each other in an arc reactor? Just no…. It’s like you didn’t even try to read about the arc reactor design and how it’s supposed work in the pseudoscience of the Marvel reality.
Peter worked tirelessly, iterating through designs and running countless simulations. The VR world offered unparalleled flexibility, letting him push the boundaries of his creativity and engineering skills. - Avarath1231mthCommented
Not while he’s in New York….
"Almost time" he heard that the next show was especially for the army. If he wasn't mistaken, this would be the moment when he should leave the "showbiz" life behind. It had been beautiful while it lasted. John would truly cherish these memories. He had always wanted to be an actor, always wanted to be famous, and he had achieved it. Now, he needed to do the real heavy lifting. Leisure time was over; it was time to face destiny. - Avarath1231mthCommented
This statement doesn’t gel with the punchline “I am here”. It falls flat. Maybe if after he explained his mission, he said something like Evil will have no place to take root as long as… <Punchline>
"Because my mission, my one true mission, is to protect them, to safeguard this world and its people, to preserve justice and peace, and that's Because..." The crowd waited expectantly, ready to rise from their seats. - Avarath1231mthCommented
She’s the same age as Gabriel, so you should fix that. Somehow, though time has passed, Gabriel is still 10 in the next chapter.
"Ugh. She doesn't know how hard it is to choose the right outfit," the almost 12-year-old Haley said. - Avarath1231mthCommented
Horrible price due to his costs. And that’s just the hardware (phone) He also created the software for it and doesn’t seem to be factoring that in
It was from AT&T stores. They offered a price of $390 per mobile phone. - Avarath1231mthCommented
Kelex
"Kronos, start the simulation," I commanded. - Avarath1231mthCommented
Kelex
Kronos, my trusty AI, responded immediately to my request. The screens in my lab came to life, filled with diagrams, graphs, and texts describing various aspects of psionic energy. - Avarath1231mthCommented
Yes….let’s do this the most difficult way, rather than going to he NYC branch on Bleecker St.
One was to assist me with scientific research, while the other was tasked with scouring the depths of the internet to find Nepal, specifically the Sanctum Sanctorum of all magicians. - Avarath1231mthReplied to moldred
So what. He can easily use a more sedate version of that tech to open portals to asteroids for robot mining. Or perhaps to other planets.
"It's time to build a portal to the Negative Zone." - Avarath1231mthReplied to scyfly
-_- or maybe he just got the idea from that movie Big Hero 6. At this rate, I wouldn’t be surprised if Baymax pops up in the story later as a product.
"...I couldn't create nanorobots, but I managed to make steel microrobots. They will work on the building." - Avarath1231mthCommented
Maybe bring the price down by at least an order of magnitude ? Much more believable at 8 million for an old building
"80 million dollars," I said. "I believe this place is the most optimal for our plans." - Avarath1231mthCommented
This breaks the defined rules of his ability stating that HE can swap places, not that he can do the same for others.
With that they calmed down. Probably thinking I can only switch with humans. That was the conclusion I've been leading them to. As they wait for another assault while outside. On the inside I grab a kitchen knife then swap Jean Grey for a spoon. - Avarath1231mthCommented
Author/ai :you’re laying it on too thick. This interaction wouldn’t happen with the obvious injury and dressings in full display.
"My, someone's been having some fun while the rest of us sat around being bored academics, haven't they?" Felicia purred, slowly circling me with undisguised interest. "Who knew you were hiding such...delicious definition beneath those baggy clothes?" - Avarath1231mthCommented
H/she was being experimented for at least 6.5 months…possible a substantial amount more if we account for the original soul’s misery…some days ago doesn’t cut it
"Ah, Hank..." Charles steepled his fingers, quickly recounting the events that had him so disconcerted. "Some days ago, I sensed an alpha-level mutant awaken, only for their abilities to suddenly, violently, surge to that of an omega-class." - Avarath1231mthCommented
Grievous stomach wound forgotten. Instead cuts and bruises over body that tend to heal rapidly due to her regeneration
"Yeah, it's me, alright," I confirmed with a wry smile, giving myself a once-over. Aside from some cuts and bruises, I seemed to be in one piece. "Sorry for the melodramatic exit there." - Avarath1231mthCommented
Why give him Sage’s powers then? He’s shackling a huge portion of her powers by not allowing it.
'Yes but that is all. No printing presses, no cement, no glass and the sort. No… you can do glass they already have it but its a protected secret be careful.'