You captured Baelish with Sansa at the beginning of the battle

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York was already spoken for by another of his wives or consorts

This guy had good karma in his last life? I’m not seeing it.

Well..no..technically Tyrion would be a bastard in this case, so his daughter through marriage to Tyesha would not be a Targaryen (yet)

Guess he’ll never know what he could’ve gotten from the old gods.

Yup…like when a certain someone makes a vow to treat him like a son….why not just use that as an excuse for a change of temperament.

What about archery?

B.S. where was this protection when he died from the slash wounds and poisoned arrows? Sounds like the very thing he shouldn’t be worried about.

He should be asking am inexperienced kid how he plans to do that, not simply mulling it over and finally agreeing.

He’s a kid, not a reincarnated soul nor an adult soul. Stop writing him as such. He doesn’t have the wisdom that comes with experience of age to have these perspectives and thoughts.

So does Hermione and yet somehow she cant be removed from her universe, meaning she’s alive. This contradicts you bringing Narcissa.

If lily evans was his partner in crime and some believe her to have been just as good or better at potions, I would have chosen her. She’s much more pleasant to be around.

Not the Jeyne who was killed in kings landing?

This setup implies that 1) lyanna and Robert weren’t betrothed and had no personal relationship 2). Eddard and Ashara Dayne had no connection at Harrenhall; nor did he fall for any other. Otherwise, he’d never have married Cersei. To be frank, he would have married a northerner if he was now Lord Stark and had made no prior commitments with any women while he was the 2nd son

Nothing makes me cringe more than an a supposedly educated character who starts off a sentence with “Me and…”. Moreso when that character is supposed to be part of the nobility.

Confusing. Didn’t Dacey marry Benjen here?

When you regurgitate scene from a tv show, you undo many of the changes you’ve implemented to your FanFiction. This isn’t the same Ned and yet you keep resetting him. This Ned knows of the plot against his brother and father by those he considered friends. He knows of Lisa Arryn and Baelish treachery as well as Hoster Tullys. He wouldn’t react the same as he did in the show. And shame on you for letting Ghost die out in the wilderness by himself when he’s the runt of the litter. No one found him.

The whole Pentos drama is stupid because they would have never ended up in hat predicament in the first place. They would never have left Bravos due to being kicked out penniless by the servants who stole everything. The other kingsguard and Oberyn were there with them. Viserys would never have become as unhinged. If they had to leave Bravos for some reason, they would have done it with their wealth and security intact.

Reed pledging Greywater to Targaryen in perpetuity wouldn’t happen. His loyalty is due to Lyanna, not the Targaryens. They’re already pledged to the starks. He might help Jon, may even pledge himself to Jon… but not to the Targaryen line.