Navy_King
will he at least tell kurenai, shizune and tsunade I mean he could use some support. plus they would move on if you plan for Mc to be gone looking into the mystery character without telling them? unless you go the Xian route where they love him so much they could never love again which honestly wouldn't work here since they aren't even in an established relationship so more than likely pulling a stunt like this would kill any potential romance with them in the future
I'll be honest and when I read in the previous chapter about having his arm cut off, I could understand it immediately and I would have done it that way too to complete shank's template, but the only thing I didn't like was with the enemy that happened, I didn't have because being sarutobi and danzo, is illogical ... I would have accepted any good Naruto villain with the exception of those two ... But hey, that doesn't mean I didn't like the chp ... I still like and support the author on your journey in this story ...
There's no reason for anything that happened in this chapter to happen. Kozuki is already the strongest. Madara is severely weakened, everyone else can't do anything to him. But he goes hiding for no reason? Why does konoha even need a stimulus??? It's the strongest village for god sake. Although it's weakened every other village is also weak. Stupidest chapter by far
the novel has its flaws, but overall it is very good. when i heard that someone has the same power as mc in the past i was thinking that you are gonna add xianxia elements or multiple crossover elements which becomes a huge turnoff. Mc has a unique power in the world of ninjas, this is also the reason why many people are reading this novel but if u do it like other fanfics and add other crossovers from different people like most fanfics it becomes less appealing. I mean come on you started off really great pliz don't make the mistake of many fanfics with too many unstable factors we can not keep up with. Just make MC the only anomality in this world
Save Haku And Zabuza and make the wave country a new ninja village and be the Hokage it would tie into everything like how pirates use the waves so wave country would be the perfect spot for a ninja village. The Village Hidden in the Waves (Namigakure). Then the Mc can be a hokage and a secret Yonko and that could make his template fully 100%
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