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  • aswsok
    aswsok12d
    Replied to Sumit_Bhamer

    Can I please find out the name of the original?

    Ch 31 Chapter 30 "Where's Minato?"
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    After signing in for Ten years, Uchiha begged me to come out .
    Anime & Comics · Sumit_Bhamer
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  • aswsok
    aswsok1mth
    Commented

    Too corny, too altruistic, the main character could have created a clone of the villain and defuse the situation, why help Izuka? Why help the Almighty? It's like reading a template text. If mc op then he should help midoriya, almighty, and so on

    Ch 2 Changing Midoriya (in a good way, I think)
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    MHA: The Sentry
    Anime & Comics · Satus_Null
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  • aswsok
    aswsok1mth
    Commented

    1, but the prices should be reasonable. You can’t jump above your head, but it’s worth a try, because I’ve actually never seen such a format, interesting

    Ch 10 Poll
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    I'm reborn as Harry Potter
    Book&Literature · FanFictionForge
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  • aswsok
    aswsok1mth
    Posted

    Isn't this one fanfic from the fanfiction site? I just read the same one....................................................................

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    French magic
    Book&Literature · FanFictionForge
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  • aswsok
    aswsok1mth
    Commented

    Make the chapters at least 2 times longer, otherwise all interest will disappear.

    Ch 22 Chapter 22 Report
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • aswsok
    aswsok2mth
    Commented

    You know, it would be nice to add other sitcoms too. BBT, Friends and others

    Ch 56 Ch.56
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    Reincarnated into Modern Family
    TV · Anomander_Adaar
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  • aswsok
    aswsok3mth
    Commented

    Why did she believe? I don't see how Tsunade could help Kazuki to improve. Other than being a shield against certain problems. And mostly, I don't see the point of being attached to both of them.

    She knew that her student was studying Edo Tensei, and she had personally procured some of her grandfather's cells hidden by Root, providing them to Kazuki. She understood that with the kid's prowess, if he really wanted, he could conduct such experiments behind her back. Still, she believed that Kazuki would heed her advice.
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    Naruto : Shadows of Resurgence
    Anime & Comics · Silent_stiele
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  • aswsok
    aswsok8mth
    Posted

    Template book. What I didn't like is that the main character chews everything up for Minato. That is, he helped him with training, helped him find a teacher, taught him the rasengan. Minato's development as a character is lacking.

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    Naruto: My Ninja Way
    Anime & Comics · TURKISH_WOMAN
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  • aswsok
    aswsok8mth
    Replied to Akasxh

    Why doesn't he know what the Gotei 13 is? If his favorite anime is Bleach?

    Ch 2 Veiled Intrigue
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    Bleach : The Last Boss Of Soul Society
    Anime & Comics · Akasxh
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  • aswsok
    aswsok8mth
    Commented

    Who is this dave

    Ch 10 Revelation
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    Monkey King in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · InconclusiveGlory
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  • aswsok
    aswsok8mth
    Commented

    May I know if this is an original work or a translation? I just read the same type of work from Russian writers. And it seems to me that this is a translation from Russian into English. Can I have the name of the original if there is one?

    Ch 7 Honoured Master
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    Basilisk
    Book&Literature · Charlottess
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  • aswsok
    aswsok9mth
    Posted

    Indeed, it sounds like a good idea. Of course adding a new variable to mean different flames will make the story either great or bad. This is how the author orders. But the development of the world is too long. I'm not ashamed to say that everyone is interested in the reaction of the guild members to the adult Natsu. But I don't see any character and world development. I also don't quite understand why the author adds references to the MCU, Wanda and Pietro. It's cool, of course, but why?

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    Fairy Tail: Master Dragneel
    Anime & Comics · Daoist_Single_Dog1
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  • aswsok
    aswsok9mth
    Commented

    Why re-translate the same thing? And with a different name? Does the true author even know about this?

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  • aswsok
    aswsok9mth
    Commented

    Cringe or not a cringe, well, the author somehow tried to give the protagonist an impetus so that he would move further both in personality and in character. But ye its cringe. So basicly need some more chapter for that

    Ch 19 Consequences
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    Naruto: Reduce All Creation to Ash
    Anime & Comics · Palpable_Banana
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  • aswsok
    aswsok9mth
    Replied to Marvel_Fan8502

    By convergence, do you mean merging the 2 universes, MCU and X-Men? For example you could make Charles Xavier's brother be a singularity, like he would be the only brother who survived Charles' attack in the womb, unlike the other universes. Because in my opinion when the X-men go back in time? they create a new timeline that will be different from the main timeline (the timeline where SI was born in Charles Xavier's brother's body).

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    THOR : THE GOD OF THUNDER
    Anime & Comics · david_vazcano
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  • aswsok
    aswsok9mth
    Posted

    I suggest the author, Write and write new books. And read comics whenever possible. Because the author sometimes greatly overestimates the strength of the characters even though they are not, also get to know the level of the characters (1A, 1B, and so on). Also read many other books to improve the quality of the writing.

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    THOR : THE GOD OF THUNDER
    Anime & Comics · david_vazcano
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  • aswsok
    aswsok9mth
    Commented

    The author does not seem to understand what level 1B characters are. A character at this sublevel is capable of exerting destructive effects on a meta universe construct of infinite or aspiring dimensionality. I don't see the point of him learning anything, since he got all his knowledge from Yggdrasil. He is more powerful than anyone else in his universe except the TOAA, and on a par with the Living Tribunal.

    Ch 4 CHAPTER 4
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    THOR : THE GOD OF THUNDER
    Anime & Comics · david_vazcano
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  • aswsok
    aswsok10mth
    Commented

    Hahahahahahahah, its so funny

    Ch 17 Chapter 17 IT Sleeps
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    Make A Wish- Rorschach's Blot
    Book&Literature · FanOfAGoodStory
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  • aswsok
    aswsok10mth
    Replied to xdestruct0x

    Well, that won't happen.

    Ch 65 Chapter 65
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    Good or Bad, Does it matter? (Harry Potter Fanfic)[TN]
    Book&Literature · Lucifer09
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  • aswsok
    aswsok10mth
    Commented

    Wow translation of Russian into English. You rarely see this

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Good or Bad, Does it matter? (Harry Potter Fanfic)[TN]
    Book&Literature · Lucifer09
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