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Too corny, too altruistic, the main character could have created a clone of the villain and defuse the situation, why help Izuka? Why help the Almighty? It's like reading a template text. If mc op then he should help midoriya, almighty, and so on
Why did she believe? I don't see how Tsunade could help Kazuki to improve. Other than being a shield against certain problems. And mostly, I don't see the point of being attached to both of them.
Indeed, it sounds like a good idea. Of course adding a new variable to mean different flames will make the story either great or bad. This is how the author orders. But the development of the world is too long. I'm not ashamed to say that everyone is interested in the reaction of the guild members to the adult Natsu. But I don't see any character and world development. I also don't quite understand why the author adds references to the MCU, Wanda and Pietro. It's cool, of course, but why?
Why re-translate the same thing? And with a different name? Does the true author even know about this?
By convergence, do you mean merging the 2 universes, MCU and X-Men? For example you could make Charles Xavier's brother be a singularity, like he would be the only brother who survived Charles' attack in the womb, unlike the other universes. Because in my opinion when the X-men go back in time? they create a new timeline that will be different from the main timeline (the timeline where SI was born in Charles Xavier's brother's body).
I suggest the author, Write and write new books. And read comics whenever possible. Because the author sometimes greatly overestimates the strength of the characters even though they are not, also get to know the level of the characters (1A, 1B, and so on). Also read many other books to improve the quality of the writing.
The author does not seem to understand what level 1B characters are. A character at this sublevel is capable of exerting destructive effects on a meta universe construct of infinite or aspiring dimensionality. I don't see the point of him learning anything, since he got all his knowledge from Yggdrasil. He is more powerful than anyone else in his universe except the TOAA, and on a par with the Living Tribunal.