Comments of chapter undefined of Transcended as Lord Buggy

you really need an editor, your work is passable but you keep going in circles even if its not needed, for example when buggy goes to lougetown he will first go buy the necessities he need, then he will go to the mountain in the back of the town after, then you came back again to him actually buying the necessities and then you'll go back to actually him going in the mountains. then there's also with oden and the book Rogers gave him then thw shack in the mountain. you keep repeating everything just to lengten the chapter

really just need an editor. too many changes has to be made inorder to understand what I'm reading

Lol Authors who write like this and ask for money make me sick..

i wanted to ask about the dragon in the picture. in the anime there is a time where dragons appear before Luffy and his crew went to the Grand Line so is he going to tame one?

For support your grammar is spot on but for the novel it's absolute trash🙄

So far so good, although there can be some editing to fix the grammar mistakes here and there.

Why didn't he ask Oden to teach him how to use swords? swords would go well with his devil fruit

his fruit has potential with awakening it's just that canon buggy is a jk

You should change Buggy's devil fruit make it like an alternate universe where buggy didn't eat the fruit.

Thanks for the chapter

I don't want a crew of a bunch of pushover, go with prisoners in impel down, that would be savage!!!

I hope author can make MC change Ace mother's fate. That way, even luffy can have a mother figure.

Thanks for the chapter

Its like reading a story made by a kid.

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter.

Have you heard of tenses?

thanks for the chapter