GoldDragonMachina
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
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That's super fast man....................
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I hope you develop the MC better, this beginning was interesting but in my opinion it made the MC and his family kind of lifeless you know?
I like how smooth the first chapter was. keep up the good work.
More explanation like how do they have power and what the different between magic and powers
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was this a summary of what happened and next chapter is when we are about to get into the real story?