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Comments of chapter undefined of Villain Retirement

Lord_Eggie
Lord_EggieLv1Lord_Eggie

i think main issue here is that as soon as novels reach 500-600 chaps, the quality suddenly hits rock bottom, best example being Supreme Magus. truly top-tier novels are those that are still entertaining to read after 1k+ chaps. Some of these are LoTM, LoHP, CCG, ISSTH. The only WN thats is <500chaps and is still top class imho is Beware of Chicken. Research+Organisation is just as important as actually writing.

DaoistsQUTlP
DaoistsQUTlPLv3DaoistsQUTlP

what is loHP

May_Song
May_SongLv13May_Song

Hi. A wild female reader has arrived.

a1extheweirdx
a1extheweirdxLv14a1extheweirdx

Do we have female reade- I'm a female!?! đŸ„ș

IceBlizzard
IceBlizzardLv13IceBlizzard

Villians abound? Or will there be some other destruction? Find out next time, on dragon ba- Villians Retirement!

PunkHazarD
PunkHazarDLv14PunkHazarD

Have faith, you’re a good writer. Your descriptions are vived but trimmed down, never overstaying their welcome. The characters all have unique voices and act like real people. The dialogue is perfect, memorable but trim enough that my eyes immediately bounce down to the next line. And the plot! Each beat is interesting, and different. Scarlet mage’s identity crisis, the mystery of the schools advanced technology, the villain attack. It’s all connected but varied, it’s not one note. That’s why I’m always excited for the next chapter.

MagnuS
MagnuSLv13MagnuS

What was the mistake in the hermes system?

Blas_de_lezo
Blas_de_lezoLv12Blas_de_lezo

I think its very hard for a webnovel to be interesting after 500 chapters. You need progression And change and its so easy for the right balance to be lost... maybe the mc doesnt have interesting goals, maybe relations GOt stuck or weirdly changed and the most common of all the mc got too op and everything lost sense. Novels that are really good after 1000 chapters are among the elite. id recommend 2: reverend insanity and lord of mysteries.

96YOUNG_MASTER96
96YOUNG_MASTER96Lv496YOUNG_MASTER96

I hate you cliff-kun

LiLRascal
LiLRascalLv13LiLRascal

It brings me great sadness to see that I have to unlock chapters now. This is really good and I enjoy it but I don't have the luxury to drop money on this. These chapters have been a blast, but all good things must come to an end. Well, off the the next novel!

Lavielle
LavielleLv4Lavielle

HAHAHAHAHA!! #ANTI-HERO ❀

Mrs1_Hitoga
Mrs1_HitogaLv4Mrs1_Hitoga

Thanks for the chapter!

Marcosvinicius
MarcosviniciusLv4Marcosvinicius

gosto muito desse autor, espero que a obra mantenha a qualidade e que ele nĂŁo cometa o mesmo erro que cometeu com sua obra antiga, ainda mais nessa obra atual dele, que Ă© muito sensĂ­vel qualquer decisĂŁo ruim pode arruinar tudo.

Kieranilner
KieranilnerLv4Kieranilner

No prob man, and besides, My Hermes System is kind of progressing a little too fast. you gotta let Van rest once in a while and after removing Hermes’ body would do just fine, i guess you could do it after the Aesir fiasco and let Van rest before doing the last part or another part entirely

Torito66
Torito66Lv15Torito66

Negan_5785
Negan_5785Lv1Negan_5785

This is way better than My Hero Academia.

Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv15Swiftescape

I love evil mc's so I'm not going anywhere. Liking the way this story is developing, thanks!

_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5_oinkchan

ty

hohmaj
hohmajLv12hohmaj

Thanks![img=recommend]

Vanessa_Kendrick_1660
Vanessa_Kendrick_1660Lv12Vanessa_Kendrick_1660

yeah

SleepyKoala_0
SleepyKoala_0Lv13SleepyKoala_0

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Iggy101
Iggy101Lv14Iggy101

Please dont be a cliffhanger.