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Comments of chapter undefined of FATE of DxD

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Prodigy9441
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Just some criticism here but i think it needs to be said. You spend more of your time wrIting out the abilities than actually telling the story. As I read i cant help but forget what is actualy going on because there are so many abilities that i think im going to need to know. Its really offputting to a reader. Granted I still love the actual story and thats why i wanted to say this. Keep at it!

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Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

Thanks for the chapter

1yr
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Randandan
RandandanLv2Randandan

I'm starting to get confused about the abilities. They're so much. Why don't you create an auxiliary chapter

2yr
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DarkMystery
DarkMysteryLv3DarkMystery

Who is Maya?

2yr
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RogueCrescent
RogueCrescentLv14RogueCrescent

Thanks for the chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Slushy_Apollo
Slushy_ApolloLv14Slushy_Apollo

I would say focus a little less on abilities cause at this point most readers are confused and probably don’t even remember 1/4 of them

2yr
Tsu_Tsu
Tsu_TsuLv13Tsu_Tsu

thanks for the chapter 👌

2yr
Phi0fany_11531
Phi0fany_11531Lv13Phi0fany_11531

nice chapter

2yr
Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

2yr
Dopaminados
DopaminadosLv1Dopaminados

great chapter, are you going to fate stay night?

2yr
REYO
REYOLv5REYO

first

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