Its not bad. There are a lot of things I was hoping to see in this story and they just flat out didnt happen. First off, best girl Scathac kinda got sidelined, and disappears for 5-6 chapters never to be heard of or even thought of. For a love interest i think its kind of a bad way to involve her. Second, there really isnt a plot to the story at all. Maybe later on but as of chapter 29, I havent found anysort of story or journey the MC goes on. Hes just messing around and it gets insanely frustrating seeing the MC become a literal god in 15 chapters and then do nothing. He has been to 3 different worlds already and barely did anything in them except again mess around. If there was an actual story here and if the MC didnt mess around the whole time i would continue reading but i dont think i can take it anymore.
Just some criticism here but i think it needs to be said. You spend more of your time wrIting out the abilities than actually telling the story. As I read i cant help but forget what is actualy going on because there are so many abilities that i think im going to need to know. Its really offputting to a reader. Granted I still love the actual story and thats why i wanted to say this. Keep at it!
The only issue I have is the update schedule and that’s just because there was a lot of chapters released at once so it screwed up how many chapters are released per week
I’m honestly stunned that this is as good as it is. I was afraid that the author would make a bland story with bland characters but I am happy to say that the author blew my expectations away. The issue with fanfics is that authors use the already created stories and make one dimensional characters. I can say with this story, the characters have depth, I enjoy seeing the characters interact together, their development as well is something that I can’t help but appreciate. You get hit with the feels and its just simply amazing. The highlight of my day is when this releases a new chapter. Keep it up author, you are doing an amazing job and you take all of my stones.
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Im caught up with the current release, just as a preface. This story is amazing, it has some of the stupid cliches that always happen wIth a transmigration noveL, but its extremely easy to ignore amd doesnt take away from the story at all. Its a unique idea and so far has been executed extremely well. I have very high hopes for the future of this novel if the author can keep with this quality work.
I usually dont give 5 star reviews and especially not this early with only 17 chapters out. But so far the chapters are a good length, the story Development and character development is superb. I love it, and i think the pacing is amazing, its not too slow or too fast as well as being a pretty original plot so far. Im excited to see where the author will take this. I have really high hopes for this story.
Absolutely amaZing story and character progression. I loved every second reading thIs story. it never felt rushed or forced in any way and the ending felt natural as well. Truly a beautiful story.
Amazing is all i have to say. Everything followed a really believable storyline where reactions were what I would expect from characters in their state of mind and experiences up to that moment. I loved Every second of it