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The protagonist is a girl. I think that's something you should've mentioned in chapter 1.
chap 2 is good. especially when it ended with witch finding her sister in Helgrey
I literally read chapter 2 to hopefully have more questions answered, and now my brain has a surge of even more questions. Am I in the matrix?
A lot of new characters introduced at once. It's a little hard to keep track of them. This chapter raises more new question instead of deepening or answering any of the ones raised in the first.
wait, is it two years later or two years earlier? I am the big confusion.
oi! I need more chapters!
Jesus, vampires scare me
Hey... This can't be it! The author has a lot of work to do, because I have just run out of chapters to read!