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Earthlings would be good instead of Earthen Residents
Rudra said " Earthen residents , today i stand before you with an opportunity of a lifetime. - ChaosSorted1yrReplied to ThanatosGreekGodCh 727 Correcting Max
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never knew teenage boys flirt to vent anger. im an angry teenage boy so should i flirt now?
Hence in his anger he did what any teenage boy would do , which was to start flirting with the girl he was ignoring for months now, to try fill the void left in his heart by his dead family. - ChaosSorted1yrReplied to Jihane_Ait_fattah
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the only nitpick of this novel is the naming otherwise its a banger
As strange clicking filled the air, one of the beasts turned its head toward the three slaves and gnashed its fangs. Shifty fell on his ass, whispering a prayer, while Scholar just froze in place. Sunny's eyes darted to the ground, trying to find something to use as a weapon. But there was not a single thing he could use: full of vitriol, he simply wrapped a length of chain around the knuckles and raised his fists. - ChaosSorted2yrCommentedCh 410 Chapter 408 | The End of a Hero, The Sky Falling.
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- ChaosSorted2yrCommentedCh 381 Augustus Won Knight is back
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bruh
For as long as he could remember, the way his sister welcomed him home had never changed—a warm greeting that was always accompanied with a jump hug and a neck squeeze. Although Liu Zhenzhen was just one year younger than him, she loved to act like a cute little koala. - ChaosSorted2yrCommented
this is so unrealistic.. like my younger sister even ignores my existence...
For as long as he could remember, the way his sister welcomed him home had never changed—a warm greeting that was always accompanied with a jump hug and a neck squeeze. Although Liu Zhenzhen was just one year younger than him, she loved to act like a cute little koala. - ChaosSorted2yrCommented
american measurements
Anyway, when Strange walked out of the tunnel, he saw a huge furnace three people high, which was exactly his goal. - ChaosSorted2yrPosted
So I read 7 chapters of this novel and this is my review: Starting with the WRITING QUALITY looks like this is the author's first work so I shouldn't expect something excellent. The writing quality is GOOD, some words look mtl but they do keep up with their expectancy. So overall, the author can improve! Now the STABILITY OF UPDATES, I don't know when the author first published this novel but there isn't a problem with his stability and there's not much to say about it. Only hope that he can increase the daily chapters for his readers. Continuing with STORY DEVELOPMENT, the first chapter sorts of confuses you and doesn't flow well because of all the unexplained terms but can be understood that author is trying to keep a mystery element to it. The latter half of the chapters are a clique, describing the protagonist's experience in the "Apocalypse Zone". The story seems like inspiration and amalgamation of several works the author adored and is trying to make his own by using all of the elements from them. The system "Fate Devourer" is and has the same features as the LOOT innate ability from the novel "The Earth's Alpha Prime". I don't know if the author was inspired by it or he just coincidentally made it similar. The novel has a bit of edginess by sort of giving the protagonist too many powers rather than a single but it seems to be the likings of the author. And next is CHARACTER DESIGN, the protagonist is depicted well and is the clique who becomes 'cold and dangerous'. The other characters aren't talked about briefly but do get explained a little. Overall, the protagonist is the same clique type following and growing his cultivation to read the realms of gods while also building up his harem. The last is WORLD BACKGROUND, the author didn't explain the world background much clearly and made it an element of confusion which makes readers wonder what's happening. The world background should be improved and should be explained to make the readers imagine the world as they run through the novel. Make the world background an element of excitement rather than confusion. THAT'S ALL FOLKS! This is my truthful review of the novel without any grudge or favouritsm. I do hope that the author improves and makes this amazing novel more amazing! keep up!
- ChaosSorted2yrCommentedCh 357 A handicapped fight
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So Read all the 10 chapters. The writing quality is top-notch, I think there will be a stability of updates once this gets mainstream, the story development is the best thing with character design being the second. The world background even though not that detailed or explained gives you some hints and is not totally blind, I think the author will explain more in the further chapters. Other than that, I love the novel very much. Getting some Noblesse + My Vampire System vibess! Keep up, author! I am gonna be one of your first fans :)!