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DarkAntares1yrCommentedNice to know inflation hasn't affected the gaming world
"Ugh, anyway don't forget to get the Neo-VR game! It's called um, Galactic Ascension! Yeah, only about $50, but from the trailer I'm sure it'll be totally worth it." Robert spoke out as he wore his backpack, and gave Jack a warm smile. After some seconds, he waved to Jack before running away.- DarkAntares1yrCommented
Bro predicts 3 world wars within the next 12 years
Starnet was a new website introduced just ten years after the 5th World War, 2035. It was a website that quickly dominated the online network community. - DarkAntares1yrCommented
Why does he keep falling from a cliff?
Miracles can be tangible benefits. For example, the main character falls off a cliff but miraculously survives, and even finds a wondrously powerful sword. Miracles can also bring about intangible benefits. Using the same example of the main character falling off a cliff, perhaps he'll get to miraculously meet a hermit who's one of the most powerful individuals in the land… - DarkAntares1yrCommented
It should be 'one' instead of '1' in this case.
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Charged is wrong. Use Charge instead.
"The walls have fallen! Charged! For the Empire! For the Emperor! Charged!!!" - DarkAntares1yrCommented
Don't verbally announce the sound of a scene. It's awkward to read. Just removing this line and the one below it will solve the problem.
BANG! BANG! BANG! - DarkAntares2yrCommentedCh 3 High School
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WARNING: This message is to all the readers that have read my book before it went into a "paused" status and to the readers that are reading it now. I am currently editing the chapters as there were some problems which each of them, thus it is not advisable to read my book right now. It will be back into the "serializing" status after a few days, so I highly recommend that you stop reading now, and come back after the book has gone into a "serializing" status again.
Ch 1 Not a Normal Day in The Life of Brynn - DarkAntares2yrCommented
WARNING: This message is to all the readers that have read my book before it went into a "paused" status and to the readers that are reading it now. I am currently editing the chapters as there were some problems which each of them, thus it is not advisable to read my book right now. It will be back into the "serializing" status after a few days, so I highly recommend that you stop reading now, and come back after the book has gone into a "serializing" status again.
Ch 1 A Normal Day in The Life of Brynn - DarkAntares2yrCommented
WARNING: This message is to all the readers that have read my book before it went into a "paused" status and to the readers that are reading it now. I am currently editing the chapters as there were some problems which each of them, thus it is not advisable to read my book right now. It will be back into the "serializing" status after a few days, so I highly recommend that you stop reading now, and come back after the book has gone into a "serializing" status again.
Ch 1 A Library of 1000 Ages - DarkAntares2yrCommented
WARNING: This message is to all the readers that have read my book before it went into a "paused" status and to the readers that are reading it now. I am currently editing the chapters as there were some problems which each of them, thus it is not advisable to read my book right now. It will be back into the "serializing" status after a few days, so I highly recommend that you stop reading now, and come back after the book has gone into a "serializing" status again.
Ch 1 Stage 1 - DarkAntares2yrCommented
WARNING: This message is to all the readers that have read my book before it went into a "paused" status and to the readers that are reading it now. I am currently editing the chapters as there were some problems which each of them, thus it is not advisable to read my book right now. It will be back into the "serializing" status after a few days, so I highly recommend that you stop reading now, and come back after the book has gone into a "serializing" status again.
Ch 1 Reborn - DarkAntares2yrCommented
Hello readers. I will try to upload daily, and I have another novel that I am working on, which I will also try to upload daily, so if you find anything wrong with the chapters, then just comment it and I will fix it. And please tell me what you think about my novel, as I want to be very interactive with my readers :)
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