Comments of chapter undefined of Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]

it's a relaxing read so far, but honestly the poor grammar is hard to stomach. hopefully it improves, but with this quality, I don't know if it will.

he became 4th lvl and stil has the same stats? it's either a mistake from the author or this novel is garbage

Put your text in Grammarly. And whats up with all those random caps?

I have a question guys. What technique did MC use to cultivate. Sure qi cultivation but what technique he use to gather qi and manipulate the qi in his body.

forced, everything is forced just to create conflict. take Nicholas's action for example, i dont believe that a person of a great clan, no matter how stupid or arrogant he is, would risks harming a patriarchs son of an opposing clan standing in the same power as their clan, just for the sake of his mobs... considering that he hates losing face, he would definitely not do something with the risk of inciting war between their two clans!!! he is like a mafia boss there so again, why would he risks everything for the sake of 4 of his mobs huh??? because he lost face since they ran away and was beaten by trash? lol so clearly, author is just forcing things here.. and whats more is that i think he does not use the "losing face" correctly too.. just some personal opinion

I'm thinking author is a virgin. seems completely clueless about women and relationships. not sure how well a virgin can write about dual cultivation. even most kids in special ed programs aren't virgins when they graduate high school. guess there are more virgin men in china than non communist countries?

How did he get 4 levels in one night? The system didnt actually say it gave him a benefit or anything. It listed stats and info but didnt show any function. This chapter was also extra hard to read. The grammar was worse than anything before. Randomly capitalizing words. Missing periods. Quoting thoughts and sentences the same. Etc... Man's instead of men through me off. First time I've seen that mistake.

Wow, what an illogical snowball is this. You beat the chicken but a dragon is coming. I wonder if i beat my friend and mr president will personally questioned me [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap].

Why do you think dual cultivation is bad? Sure, I get that it's bad if he doesn't have a partner, but if he has the option to cultivate normal and dual, then I don't know what he's complaining about.... My original question was if he's gay by the sigh.... I'm over there ... I will see what follows in this chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chap

thanks for the chapter

good books to read but poor spelling

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