Zentmeister
MC was a smart before but now he is plain dumb again. He know his sons will fight for hegemony/throne yet here another forced plot and another drama again and again. Ava already made her choice back then why author decide to make her a mistress when Ava "left" him already but Veronika didn't even when she "actively" confess to Berengar. I knew it. This masterpiece is going down with this brainless forced plot. MC kids ruining a novel. Author if you can, kindly rewrite this chapter since you already rewrite a chapters before.
The chapter with Ava was fine I thought. You need to stop letting people force you to change your story. It's YOUR novel, not theirs. Write whatever you want to write, they can go write their own if they don't like this one. This is an amazing novel and only you as the author knows best how to keep it amazing, not us mindless readers who have never written a story ever in our life.
Liked the chapter a lot, Ava was a long time coming. Although it might have been nice to have more of a reason why Berengar would give in; maybe a hard day as a ruler? Perhaps he lost an important shipment of goods to a storm or ran into another dead end from a good lead when researching the gods? Thanks for all your hard work!