Comments of chapter undefined of Tyranny of Steel

MC was a smart before but now he is plain dumb again. He know his sons will fight for hegemony/throne yet here another forced plot and another drama again and again. Ava already made her choice back then why author decide to make her a mistress when Ava "left" him already but Veronika didn't even when she "actively" confess to Berengar. I knew it. This masterpiece is going down with this brainless forced plot. MC kids ruining a novel. Author if you can, kindly rewrite this chapter since you already rewrite a chapters before.

That was one stupid chapter … after all that oh I hate them including her character he turns her around to make babies without a incline to what his wife might think. Total nonsense.

The chapter with Ava was fine I thought. You need to stop letting people force you to change your story. It's YOUR novel, not theirs. Write whatever you want to write, they can go write their own if they don't like this one. This is an amazing novel and only you as the author knows best how to keep it amazing, not us mindless readers who have never written a story ever in our life.

MC is seen as a godsend to the German people…and he’s taking up a spoiled woman with kids, who broke their engagement? That is very disappointing judgement

Man this author is getting this desperate to bring in every female huh? Even ones who threw him away

well that escalated quickly... lol

Liked the chapter a lot, Ava was a long time coming. Although it might have been nice to have more of a reason why Berengar would give in; maybe a hard day as a ruler? Perhaps he lost an important shipment of goods to a storm or ran into another dead end from a good lead when researching the gods? Thanks for all your hard work!

Change the story’s name from Tyranny of Steel to Tyranny of plot armor and random Japanese chick.

This makes me unhappy and disgusted

lol thanks for the chapter.

Very good chapter. I like the fact that the moron is finally going to die. He really has it coming

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I don’t like this

Welp that's the last straw for me you guys have fun reading the rest of the story.

Trash chap

Never truly understand 2 people procreation, Are you guys writing an Poet? That can rival Shakespeare?

man I love the world but pls why has this novel turned into a gotta catch em all hornfest

Sigh 🚶🏾‍♂️

well, this mini-NTR arc was as inevitable as it was cheesy. pretty sure the author just phoned it in on the quality of the chapter lol.