Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

Entrail! Good chapter, and i just wanted to say that you've improved massively when it comes to character interactions, i genuinely caught myself smiling at the booty tap scene lol. Great job and i hope you keep up the good work while staying in good health!

Everyone after ren gets his butt slapped

Dwarf getting kinky with ren :)

He just got groped by a dwarf. Clearly an auspicious start.

Just a few minutes ago, I was crying about Rue's breakdown (euphoria) and now I'm reading a sus dwarf flirting with my best boy. Life is really full of surprises, I have to say. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

So is Ren x Elliut

Thanks for the chapter! That Dwarf be acting up. And world building is actually my favourite part of a lot of books, so dont worry about it. I've read quite a few novels where the world building ruined the story by not giving a reader a better idea of the scope of the world and the people in it

Can't wait for him to find someone to forge his sword 🤗🤗

having action all the time is tiring, adding down time in between action is something you don't need to apologize for.

I think the language altering artifact isn’t something that should be glossed over. And tbh using it for a signpost is the absolute most banal application of such a technology. Imagine, a display that changes what’s on it based on who’s looking at it. 2 people could be looking at something and not realize they’re looking at something different. You could use this to disguise things for certain people and not for others. For example covering a side of a building to make it look like a restaurant, when really it’s a secret base for Monolith, etc.

Author may I ask. In the beginning MC has a magic book right? The book that can see the future of the main protagonist (kevin) and change reality. Where is the book rn??

Elluid knew what exactly he was doing and no one can convince me otherwise. I love him already

Is a just 1 chapter Today???

Only this story will stop me from playing Lost Ark.

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world- building = awesome story

No I want action to happen in an empty room >:(

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good stuff and good world building!