Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV
The Author's POV
Entrail_JI
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Found it very good with the debt of the parents guild. Now Ren has a goal (removing the debt) and the foreshadowing of a strong emotional bond with the family makes it an even better motivation. Furthermore, the fact that Emma lives also in the northern district creates a very good chance for character development, especially considering that she isn't bound to the MCs(novel) group dynamic. Additionally, you can now place the infodump in the dialogue between Emma (which because of her recourses and heritage has probably a vast network of connections) and Ren which is also good.
i still love this daily chapters that don't even miss a word to make me smile from how well writed this plot and novel really is, and, the family arc for a month, i do hope we get a lot of time to him with the family, but that debt... its just To much having 95 million U's of debts.... and thanks for the chapter!!!
This chapter was originally longer, but after thinking a bit, I figured it was better to cut it. It was a lot of info dump. I tried my best to reduce it here, and am planning on expanding more on the points I didn't talk about here in future chapters. Btw, if we hit 800 chapters, 3 chaps tomorrow. It's nighttime here and I didn't have time to edit the last chap.
