Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

I really hope it can be expanded upon because right now I just find the MC and Melissa’s interactions completely annoying. So far, the MC has just acted like a fool around her unlike with everyone else, and she isn’t exactly that likeable even if I understand that that’s the way she is. Really hope this will see some shifts or I’ll definitely find myself starting to skim past any interactions between these two.

MC becomes a conrnball around Melissa. It's out of character and annoying.

Kill off Melissa! Kill off Melissa!

Chapters with Melissa in are odd and currently not enjoyable due to how odd the MC acts but I hope there will be a twist or it improves as currently the MC is cringy whenever she is around...🤔

GUYS I STOCKPILED BY ACCIDENT AND THERE IS 56 CHPATERS NOW AHHAHAHA THANK GOD I DID IN UNOWINGLY SO MANY CHPATERS ADDED STOCKPILE NEXT TIME ALRIGHT AHAHHA

thanks for the chapter. though the ranting between Donald, Ren and Mellissa completely ruined the chapter to me. It's annoying and weird the way Ren behaves when around Mellisa. Also, Donna didnt say it is a mist to seat with teammates, it was an advice or suggestion if I am bot wrong. Ren could have simply sat somewhere else as he know it was gonna be trouble.

thanks for the chapter. could you guys help me decide what will i do, stockpiling or read it as soon as new chapter released? 😫

The aUthoR only likes good commenTs lOl 😂

That's something i was wondering, what happened with the people and the countries that aren't America or Europe, because it looks like majority of the people on this world is either European or American because of the name, there are some asians too, what happened with Africa? South America,Brazil? What happened with come to Brazil ? Did the demons came to Brazil after Pangea and killed everyone 😂, or the elves are chilling on the rest that left Amazonia. lol

i just use one of my precious Golden ticket... i hope this novel keep going..😘😘

The novel is no masterpiece. So far, the idea is pretty good. But that's it. Grammar is nice, too. But how the MC is behaving is strange and not how I feel it should be. Everything feels... kinda wrong.

I can already see what you're trying to do. You want the MC to become friends with Donald. Maybe they can bond over their utter simpness and inability to think of a good insult

Soo good

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter author sama

MC needs Melissa's potions, that's why he's acting somewhat subservient towards her. He doesn't have enough money to have a proper stock of intermediate (market-price) potions. So yeah, nothing goofy about that. It's necessary atm to be somewhat in her "good graces"

alright

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And skimming parts where cringy OOC happens. No thanks