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Seyo_122yrReplied to DaisukiDayoSenpaiWhat’s wrong with slightly altering our world’s canon in a fictional world? Lol
[Like Lucifer, you feel anger towards the god you loved so much. You dedicated so many years serving and giving your best for this god and, in the end, you were only rejected by him because he loved another more than you. Your feelings are perfect for Lucifer's Descendant System.- Seyo_122yrReplied to mnc777
Actually pretty believable
The bandage was thick enough to cover his golden eyes but also sufficiently thin to see the mana flow. - Seyo_122yrCommentedCh 5 Chapter 4 – Deculein (4)
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Why did I instantly think of this guy from the description, even though it clearly doesn’t follow…? Lol
He was about two meters tall and had massive broad shoulders. Below his nose was a long blonde beard that stopped halfway through his neck, and his sea-blue eyes and long blonde hair that cascaded all the way to his back made him look quite handsome. - Seyo_122yrCommented
I really hope it can be expanded upon because right now I just find the MC and Melissa’s interactions completely annoying. So far, the MC has just acted like a fool around her unlike with everyone else, and she isn’t exactly that likeable even if I understand that that’s the way she is. Really hope this will see some shifts or I’ll definitely find myself starting to skim past any interactions between these two.
Ch 55 Hollberg [1] - Seyo_122yrReplied to Bleb_Go
Lol
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This is too perfect 😂
"Don't mind it" Gu Qing Shan lightly patted Gu Qing Shan's shoulder "She used to study the sword once" - Seyo_122yrReplied to OnePun
No… impossible…
Zhang Zong Yang looked at the young man with a complicated expression: "The President wants to see you" - Seyo_122yrCommentedCh 18 Birthday Present (Part 1)
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Guess you could say he has a Nak for this stuff…
'Was it a mixture of luck and sensitivity to mana?' Khan wondered as his expression grew severe. 'Did I understand her words due to my similarities with the Nak?' - Seyo_122yrCommentedCh 16 Deterioration
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I don’t mind shy characters, but I do mind bumbling idiot characters. It’s not about manning up or anything like that. I just don’t see how someone with lesser talent (in this type of story where talent tends to matter) and a lack of anything interesting including charisma can hang on or even thrive. There’s making a character normal-ish feeling to be relatable, and then there’s making them feel annoying to read. As much as it’s nice to imagine that average people can become the best of the best at something, especially when surrounded by geniuses. You can be a good career physicist, but when surrounded by Einsteins, you are 9 times out of 10 not going to be anything special in comparison. So unless we’re talking about that 1 time out of 10, it’s going to be too much friendship and plot armor or too many plot conveniences for me. Unless he’s hiding some massive stuff. Like the worldbuilding so far though, hope the character becomes interesting at least. Interesting characters are enough for me, strength isn’t the only way too keep people invested, but it certainly is nice.
Ch 14 Uniform - Seyo_122yrReplied to NebulaShadow
Why did I read this as defensive…?
Chapter 10: Profiling - Seyo_122yrReplied to Darkirisk
What is this from?
"It was fun… really, really fun…" Her body slowly broke down into tiny lights resembling fireflies before floating towards the clouds and disappearing. - Seyo_122yrReplied to Tipota
Where. From. Get...?
She rests her eyes on my face for a few seconds, then bites her lips as she sizes me up. Her stare is uncomfortable. - Seyo_123yrReplied to VictoriousHermit
Unintentionally hilarious in unedited form.
But hearing that man's name was enough to engage him, but he forced himself to calm down.