Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

Honestly, this chapter is great. I love how it was built on just one quote 'Effort never betrays' Here you used real-life experiences and it was very touching.

This is a beautiful start!

Ben… I mean Ren Dover…

my life in a nutshell. Eat, sleep study...forget the study part

the prologue just describe the reality of the world it's really a cruel world we live in it's always a battle

Original idea! :D

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I think Ben would've made a better name. Just my opinion.

Do you know what talent is? Its a convenient excuse to absolve you of the responsibility of not getting what you want.

exp

One of my fav novel.

As an author myself, this premise is so enticing. And I love this book! Keep on reading for a fun journey.

Hlw

Hello

thanks for the chap

Thx

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