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Mature_Raven

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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven6mth
    Commented

    this is just pathethic. you really started your fic with such a stupid monologue

    What? You're not a virgin? In that case then F*ck you! How dare you read this?! Don't you know the feelings of us pitiful, good looking, and drop dead gorgeous boys, LIKE ME, who have never even had the chance to date a girl?
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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven7mth
    Commented

    good out?

    Zenith nodded "Oh good out the door and leave here."
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    Villagers in Mushoku Tensei
    Anime & Comics · lapluiearrive
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven7mth
    Replied to Drako_0692

    yeah Ains is a characterless and bland. Made to appeal to degenerate virgin losers by being as bland as possible

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    Danmachi: Shrouded in the Abyss of Darkness
    Anime & Comics · DeeplyLostInShadow
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven7mth
    Commented

    Seriosly just do something instead of rambling about what you plan to do.

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Reverend Insanity - Blazing Glory Lightning Brilliance (RI fanfiction)
    Book&Literature · Jaed21
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven8mth
    Replied to NowGoWithTheFlow

    I havent read the story yet but these seem to me like something written by an 11 year old kid that has no understand on politics and how to govern a state.

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    Reincarnated as an Imperial Prince
    History · SorryImJustDiamond
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    now this is stupid. I get you dont want esdeath and she has no place in the empire. But she is too powerful to leave alone. She is a nuclear weapon

    At present, no one was aware of my plan to delay Esdeath, not even General Budo or Prime Minister Shoi. I intended to maintain this secrecy for as long as possible. I was still contemplating a strategy that would prompt Esdeath to voluntarily secede from the Empire. By achieving this, I would have the freedom to openly label her as a traitor without tarnishing the Empire's image.
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    I have become the Child Emperor
    Anime & Comics · Support_Five
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Posted

    Kind of nice but Mc is an angsty loser. Its get too annoying reading about this thoughts. Honestly he is only a loser because he keep thinking he is one, talking in his head like one and acting like one. Else he would be fine. Its an angst fest

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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    oh gee. the mc did the "impossible" wow. much applause

    Zick had given a characteristic to his mana which is only possible when a person becomes a peak rank knight. He had done something which was considered as impossible by the whole world. 
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    He's a loser because he keeps calling himself a loser and thinking he is broken.

    'Even after trying so hard by only making rational decisions....in the end....I am still a loser'
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    No, you were just a loser and a coward

    Zick....no Noah from the past life knew from a long time ago, if he had tried taking revenge against the bully he would have lost himself. That is the reason he locked himself in a room living as a SHUT-IN. 
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    Too cliche. seriously

    Not bothered by their attention at all, Zick ran towards the enemy knights with his sword covered in mana. 
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    I have no idea why the cat did this. Its does not benefit it in anyway

    "I shall vow upon all my 9 lives, if ever the whole Garcia family's bloodline is destroyed I will form a contract with you. I shall not harm you in anyway and help you if I am willing to do so"
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    If i am forced to serve a got. It better be a hot girl as a consolation

    The goddess of fairness, Fiona's church
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    just use parents credit card

    And there was also the problem of his sword not being able to handle the mana. But this could be alleviated by buying a better sword so he wasn't worried about it. 
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    I still think he is a dog that sold his loyaly. He could do his own thing but he let himself become just a servant

    From the beginning to the end he didn't have the right to choose who he would serve, only following the order of the current lord is all he could do.
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    Honeslty this is so sad. Basically most knights employed are trash. Jobbers that wasted their lives

    This event led Zick's sword skill to match any knight of the Melvix family and even surpass some of them. 
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    Honesly his butler is dumb if he did not realized what the Mc is doing. The root give people mana and the things he as to collect makes you stronger. if it were me I would also do that

    Ch 13 Garcia Ceremonial party
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    I would totally forced the maid to eat all of it. hahahha

    The maid couldn't bear the smell of the felix root and started running somewhere to throw it away.
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Replied to CRONZ_2437

    If he nows how to sell and it has an audience it would take him a day. But since he does not, this is really too unlikely

    And as he thought it was successful, he started making money within one month.
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Mature_Raven
    Mature_Raven9mth
    Commented

    Hey do you guys know any stories with a similar quality to this?

    Ch 55 Schedule
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    Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy
    Fantasy · xlntz
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