Comments of chapter undefined of Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Draugzel
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It's not flattering you author, but I agree with you and I don't even have a problem with the previous chapter. I usually don't like it when there is this revelation, for two main reasons, which were just what was pointed out, when it loses the unique element of knowledge and/or drama/fights/discussions (which several authors use whenever they release this fact) mainly to talk / accuse that they are comic books / movies (and not think about multiple realities, or someone had a small glimpse of another place) so I prefer it not to happen, so as not to fall into these two aspects. however, it didn't happen here, so for me it was good and didn't change anything. the question of raven, I'm in favor of putting her as a love interest as well, and it can be a cool and interesting dynamic of the two, something to expect, of course, I think what was done in building the relationship with kara is very good ( and kara himself is a very character, and his own interpretation/creation made it better, but I would still add raven, I won't comment on others for yes or no).
You seem agitated and so defensive, chill dude, chill. You know what, even though I still have alot of things to say, about how you didn't reply about the part where kara would have been fine even without the mc, for she still have her cousin, and how unnecessary his actions he had towards her from the very beginning, and made her emotionally dependent towards him. And about how mc gave maxima some semblance of hope, towards him, or about how he never outrighly push them all away. And about how a kardashian reality TV. is so much more different to dc. I'll be the mature one between us and say:"Your right bruh. mc shouldn't have a harem, no-harem for the win, all hail non-harem, praise the God of non harems" āā peace dude peace, we'll have it your way, you win. āpeace.
well, It can be said that while kara and raven have the same experience(losing both of their homes, watching it get destroy, and their people dying), raven had it the worst for she is the caused of it, and can be said that kara is still more Fortunate, because she still have a cousin, a family who also have families who will willingly accept her. While raven has none and alone, and each day of her life she will have to live the guilt and the fact that she caused the demise of her people and her own mother(couple with the fact that she's a half demon and her father is an evil incarnate, then no one can truly accept her and people will find it hard to trust her), she will face it alone, so at this point, her meditation technique is a God send and truly help her survive and live with that fact, if not then there's a possibility of her falling into the darkside and under her father's control. So mc can't truly criticized the technique itself. for if he can't live with the fact of no linger being able to go home(that's why he always try to find a way back in every way possible), what of raven who caused her own home and her people their own demise. At this point, mc is a hypocrite, for criticizing, doubting, and looking down on it the technique.
people believe that the world is only about truth or lies, but it's wrong, in this world or any realities, what truly matters is hard facts, and despite this universal truth, people only chose to accept the facts that appeal to their way of thinking, they are so limited, that they can only accept the truth that are comfortable for them, so this is simply them wanting to hang on to their own personal power, as realizing things may not what they accepted and believe them to be unsettles them its overwhelming. But it's a fact that they never truly know the absolute truth. That's why Xavier losses his mind, because he could not accept the truth or the fact that lays before him.
Well that rant/explanation was very detailed, diverged into different topics and a lot longer than it needed to be. I read 1/3rd of it before giving up. I agree with your points in the beginning of what I read, but I also doubt most people would bother to read most of what you've written in one sitting if it isn't entertainment based like the story.
