Comments of chapter undefined of Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

put a notice +18 in case we are not alone in the room.

It was great. Maybe you could have written more descriptions. Things he felt and how much he wanted her to feel even better. How he was losing control of himself with how beautiful and sexy she is in combination with his animal side. How her moan makes him go harder and describe her begging for more.

It was pretty good to be honest

it was surprisingly good, for like you said the first time you wrote. and definitely needs one with her costume. and i'm enjoying how you are portraying kara's personality and their relationship.

it is interesting to find out if they will have children, and what opportunities they have due to the fact that they are a hybrid of Kryptonian and Sayan.

Noice

Excellent chapter only lacked him to receive a Zenkai boost after this tough battle

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A solid 8/10. Very good! It would have scored higher if you added some dialog

If she gets pregnant I hope you power level him because it would really hurt his Saiyan Pride to be weaker than his Mate and Kids, he also needs to get stronger quickly to protect himself from Clark maybe🤔. Thanks for the Great Chapter.

She could also wear shorts under the skirt for her "public" outfit.

Not much of a fan for these kind of scenes, but thanks for updating..

Subarashi

Saiyan + Kryptonian = scary - hmm the kryptonian mind take away the weakness of the saiyan inability to learn if not training or fighting wile the saiyan adaptability slowly take away the weaknesses of the kryptonian side plus gaining ki from the sun scary

it's pretty good to be honest no complaints from me

Gotta say, it was better than most stuff that I read off wattpad

Neighbors be like…

When I think of using the power of the Oozaru without the form I cant help immediately imagine the SS4 form with the body hair and all.

just think, a kryptonian sayian would be so op

Thx for the chap