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I get that he wants to reveal his skills so he can use them in public... But why doesn't he reveal his abilities in controlled spaces? Show them only to the hokage to do damage control. Now at 6-7years old he put a target on his back. He is the key to win the current and future wars. If I were an enemy kage, I would send suicidde squads non-stop until the MC dies. There is no possibility of winning any wars with the MC alive.
lol he is a political nightmare. Friend of the local Senju Princess, this probably got him a straight ticket to suicide missions to get rid of someone who was not planed for her investment of her emotion. Meaning that all the political ties that Tsunade could bring with a political marriage, he was an eyesore. Talented enough to warrant attention but not enough for special treatment. Jiraiya got on the Hiruzen's team because they were both perverts and could relate to each other, he is also easy to lead and groom with enough intelligence to be competent, but not enough to shake off manipulations. With no strong background he was in the first wave of student sacrifice and somehow survived. Now with new resources that no one can accomplish, he is now "Special" enough to warrant personal guidance and to be a case study if what he does can be copied or researched into. I wonder how Koharu, Hiruzen, and Danzo feels having a weird child be their junior student? Bet they will feel insecure about where they stand when Tobirama puts more attention on him and his abilities for war support more than their own input.
I know they're going to call me a fool for what I'm going to say but ! Can people stop being so toxic?!. They are literally at war, the people around them are dying and I don't know about you, but I would help. That is normal, at least most would help someone if they were within their means and would not stare. Of course I would recommend that the MC leave the village at the end of the ninja war. Konoha at that time was very ruthless towards anyone. Postscript: The excuses the MC gives for his powers are horrible, no ninja would believe them.
sorry. this action of mc reviving them is stupid.... like really stupid... its different matter if mc have a kage level of strength to protect himself from other who will forced him and use him... remember there is danzo and hiruzen who will also used him or sacrificed anyone for greater good... even sakumo who is loyal and have a lot of merit and failed a mission just he can save his comrade ,die because of hiruzen miss managment and konoha's political.. i feel like this is writing of a kid who only know "all sunshine" in the world of war and death is a way of live. this is action of mc is unlogical and tend to make u get exploited, kidnapped and experimented by power haungry people.
Enthusiasm for writers, criticism from readers is your capital to be able to develop the work in your story in a better direction. don't take it to heart but make it a motivation to work. remember the best writer is not he only writes interesting stories but he who can finish his work until the end of the chapter. My suggestion is to add the MC's thoughts such as: 'I will show my every talent so that Tobirama Senju will admit me because in this war era it is the best potential of every ninja so that they can be recognized by the ninja world, especially tobirama is the root of making kenjutsu (forbidden jutsu) so that the ability I will definitely be accepted and will not be suspicious. Thanks for the chapter 😍.
I can agree that resurrection is the pinnacle of weird abilities to show but people in this world the 2nd Hokage was trying to master it, so it isn't THAT weird... I probably would have shown it in a more discrete way but nonetheless I wouldn't have kept it a secret, so please stop with the toxicity.
Es idiota? No me importo tanto cuando reveló la mayoría de sus habilidades pero ser lo suficientemente idiota como para revelar que puede revivir personas? Acaso es un impecil sin cerebro? Ósea revivir gente inútil ósea que carajo revivir a carne de cañón a costa de su propia explotación que carajo. Además de eso la historia es decente