Comments of chapter undefined of Hero of Darkness

Dont listen to those people man they dont appreciate good good story telling.

This is good chapter, this is really wonderful self reflection. Thanks for the chapter.

Thank you for the chapter! No need to listen to the haters, if the book isnt for them, its not for them! Just write your story as you want and the true fans will stick around for the wonderful ride you have in store!

Thank you for taking your time in developing a logical character with realistic change. Much better than some paper characters to fulfill some 14-year-olds edgy fantasy.

Forget about the haters and do what you do best, personally I love the way you're going with the storyline and character. This is the very first novel that actually has logic and reasoning behind it. Keep up the great work!!!

dear author... i like that your thoughtful of your fans opinions and are willing to even give us a reason for why you're writing the way that you are but please keep it as their opinion only and don't let it truly affect your style and your plot we love your work or people wouldn't get so amped up with their thoughts and opinions personally I'm very happy with the way the story is developing it's nice to see the slow progression versus the instant and hope for many many more beautiful chapters and volumes to come...

About the mc being 'Hypocrite' in some part that reader complain about, don't worry, at least the mc do aware of that, rather than the other way around, the first part of this 'rant' post I mentioned do even mention this, for those who don't know about, google the post title in the image

Its not like i dislik his hero personality its just that he keeps contradicting what he says. in the beginning u mentioned that he has become a tyrant after inheriting he will of the snake and that he has matured. however he gets too emotional and proceeds to become a hero based on his impulsive emotions and proceeds to contradict his words to work only to benefit him. i hope that what you said will come in the future that when he truly experience that good and the bad of both sides of the coin then he will truly become an anti hero without being a hypocrite. i was truly excited in the early chapters on how he will mature and trust no one like he said; that he will be a cautious, cunning, and ruthless person to survive in the so cold dog eats dog world.

i mean what hes doing is totally antihero lol i like it love the torcher of the lil bsterds lol

If the author is pressured by comments into rectifying his writing i feel people have gone the wrong way about it in the way they posted their opinion, People stay objective with your opinion @author i personally liked the development for Kahn but would hope for a little more descriptive "action/fighting" :D

Thanks for the chapter. This is really great chapter. Author, keep up the good work.

Killing the Mother and children is extra but to completely eliminate a future Threat it is necessary

Man, the story rocks, keep going!! ;-)

I don't want to bother you, but his character was only doing things if it had benefits, but now he's as Batman saving and revenge for others Isn't that the opposite of what he was, doesn't it mean that if he saw someone being tortured and sacrificed himself to help her like a saint or hero

slow logical development and progression is always better keep at what you doing

I really like how you have him progressing like you know a real person. Trauma takes time to get over and stories where the MC just changes like a switch makes me think they were psychos the entire time.

let's kill the next scoundrel and rich rapist. 3 out, 1 to go.

let 's put the rich bandits down.

I am loving the MC becoming someone that decides things by his own, without being manipulated by others