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Gurthang1mthCommentedFair enough, I just hope this doesn't become and excuse to create long filler chapters instead of just quickly solving issues like he is capable of
Yeah, writing filler is boring, but I couldn't just teleport Rayleigh to the Grand Line since he didn't pay for that. But this chapter was also to introduce the fact that Rayleigh won't be killing mice with an RPG. If he can solve an issue without a sword, he will do so. Now we are back to the action.- Gurthang1mthCommented
Is ThAt a jOjO ReFeReNcE?!
Pucci was very well known for its delicious food while St Poplar was renowned for its liquor. San Foldo was actually famous for its festivals. With these places all connected in a way that allowed for daily commutes, this was a lively region and popular area for everyone. - Gurthang1mthCommented
Boruto haters unite!
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How to end Oda's never ending manga: "I will let the force guide me to the one piece"
If Qui Gon can pilot a submarine he's never used before from one end of the planet he's never been on, through the monster infested core, to the other end of the planet, without getting lost or running out of fuel, then you can obviously tell how overpowered Force Guidance is. It also shows how compatible the Force is for stories in worlds like One Piece, so I hope this chapter inspires some Star Wars One Piece Crossovers. - Gurthang1mthCommented
That is the name of a palm/claw technique, not a sword one. Please don't keep using these exaggerated names in the future (adding words like tiger or dragon to look cool)
Rayleigh's posture after executing his move was precisely what he needed to be in to perform the follow up move he'd probably name, Heaven Piercing Tiger Claw. - Gurthang1mthCommented
With his abilities he could have easily avoided this, for heavens sake he could just move the babies neck the other direction or change places with the mother. With his abilities he could do this a thousand times before they even opened their eyes, seems forced.
"Hahahahaha... Oh my god, you became a mother of 3 dragons at the tournament and now a phoenix" Sirius roared in laughter. - Gurthang1mthPosted
Overall a meh novel, the characters are simple and one dimensional and there is no sense of complexity to interaction and world direction. Events progress in line with how the author wants, not tied to logical consequences and the main character is simple and dumbed down. The MC regresses mentally to that of a child at the start and periodically remembers or somehow completely forgets meta knowledge according to plot convenience. Most of the new characters introduced that interact with the MC are literally ripped from other stories: Zenitsu, Yuujirou Hanma, etc. The training he pays for consists of his instructor (Zenitsu) instructing him to do obvious and simple things anyone could think of. He is like a robot who requires input to do anything, its an insult to a humans intelligence to claim he is anything but an 8 year old mentally.
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I have
"Understood, then I want to have the abilities of the Goro Goro no Mi from one piece, but with no drawbacks and For my secon-" - Gurthang1mthCommented
His teacher will obviously b-THE HIT GAME AMONG US FOUND ON STEAM
I wonder how many people will figure out who Rayleigh's teacher will be. I did leave a rather large hint that has been in this story since the 2nd chapter. Hopefully, those who did not guess it will slap their foreheads on the reveal and say, "I can't believe I didn't see him coming. It was Right there!" - Gurthang2mthCommentedStopping time is basically the 'Fuck You, I Win' move in almost all situations. That and time travel are just so overpowered as abilities, it's a wonder Heaven ever let Hell's demons gain any influence at all on Earth, especially when they were still under Michael's command.
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This is great
"Yes, Xiao Ming pays his respects to the master." Elder Huo's words were exactly what Xiao Ming wanted, there was no reason to refuse, and he immediately paid his respects. - Gurthang2mthReplied to R_66
fair enough, but he still doesn't really utilize his power to a tenth of its potential
"Yes, Xiao Ming pays his respects to the master." Elder Huo's words were exactly what Xiao Ming wanted, there was no reason to refuse, and he immediately paid his respects. - Gurthang2mthPosted
🚨!*WARNING INCEST JUMPSCARE*!🚨 This is a pretty good HP fanfic most things considered, though the Marvel integration leaves a little to be desired (to be fair its just starting to reach that). The creativity to break away from Hogwarts is always refreshing and the writing quality is good, so my main gripe besides the somewhat lackluster Marvel presence is the really creepy incest, which is a obvious no-go for me, in addition to the harem. If you are fine with those things this would probably be a 4/5 for you (5/5 in comparison to most webnovel garbage), and 5/5 if you are into that stuff (Begone! ♰).
- Gurthang2mthCommented
Dumbledore watching as Harry hits him with the Dual Dragon Tiger Heavenly Demon Ultimate Yin-Yang Claw Slam followed by him stating "you have eyes yet failed to see Mount Tai"
After finishing the set, his Magical power surged. His Gaseous Magical Core finally transformed into Liquid Magical Core and with that, his Magical might increased several folds, but there was still a lot he desired. He might have grown stronger, but he didn't have any real-life experience. - Gurthang2mthReplied to GnomeBob
Regardless I respect your decision as the pacing and changes in the novel are up to you, and just wanted to voice my doubts.
Rayleigh intercepted the lion's next strike. Rayleigh's Nensaber elicited a shower of sparks on contact with the Lion's sword. The Lion's physical strength was certainly higher than Rayleigh's or Killua's, but Rayleigh used Enhance Attribute: Strength on himself and Force Stasis on the Lion to even the match. Killua seemed to cover himself in static every once in a while as he looked like he was trying a new technique while Rayleigh exchanged sword blows with the Lion for several minutes without giving an inch. - Gurthang2mthReplied to GurthangCh 50 Chapter 50 Slaughtering the Chimera Ants
- Gurthang2mthCommentedCh 50 Chapter 50 Slaughtering the Chimera Ants
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Even if we assume that the lion has some super blade borrowed through a favor, I think the defense ability of the other ants is a bit to powerful. The ant's shell shouldn't be capable of causing normal lightsabers to just "bounce off" that seems a bit extreme. With all his buffs and abilities his nen blade shouldn't take "seconds" to cut through the "extras" shells
Rayleigh intercepted the lion's next strike. Rayleigh's Nensaber elicited a shower of sparks on contact with the Lion's sword. The Lion's physical strength was certainly higher than Rayleigh's or Killua's, but Rayleigh used Enhance Attribute: Strength on himself and Force Stasis on the Lion to even the match. Killua seemed to cover himself in static every once in a while as he looked like he was trying a new technique while Rayleigh exchanged sword blows with the Lion for several minutes without giving an inch. - Gurthang2mthCommented
Is he secretly a vampire? Because seeing this phrase gets tiring after a while, good payback isn't always in the form of violence. There are other means that can be more beneficial outside of fulfilling petty desires.
Harry didn't know if either Lucas or the real estate broker would betray him or not, but it was better to cover his bases. If they ever betrayed him then Harry could always find them and make them pay with blood… - Gurthang2mthCommented"Magic is awesome!!" Harry exclaimed cheerfully as he threw his hands in the air. Today was the best day of his life… Not only he was able to reunite with his mother, but he was also able to escape that wretched place. Harry was also excited over the prospect of Magic… Apparently, he wasn't a freak. He was a Wizard, just like his father.
