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Lucien1214dCommentedCh 126 Chapter 1267: Demon King? Elf King!- Lucien1216dCommented
🤣 if they got a gun bring a bigger one or multiple bigger ones
As an Easterner, Reji also inherited the "fear of insufficient firepower" tradition. So, to put it bluntly, the reason he gave the Sorcery Demons so much power and space was to vigorously engage in scientific research. - Lucien1217dCommentedCh 179 Changes in the clan
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- Lucien1211mthCommentedCh 29 Classroom of Oddities
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honest review here. so the story moves way to fast that you can't keep up with it at times and have to reread certain parts to understand a little bit of it. we barely have any background. writing quality is ok, the story line could be something if it was fleashed out more. but over all what brings this book to its very knees is its story progressen, how fast paced and how much plot armour it has. it's like James throw a rock in anger and broke a window and killed someone, but the guy was a serial killer and another guy showed up and said it was suicide and everyone believed him, then his mother came to kill him bc she didn't like him ect he killed her puppy. it's like that. the way the story is, it is just to fast paced to much going on with not a spectacular beginning. it could be good. if the setting was more detailed and thought out. if it wasn't so rushed, if they actually made a power scale. there is not one in here. I read this for free btw on my daily reads. I suffered over 50 chapters. it was ok for awhile a bit of a rush in the beginning isn't so bad it kills everything for the future sometimes so I stuck with it. but the way this has progressed was what killed it. all in all its not a bad idea, just poor execution of it. maybe need to flesh out the story more on a story board or note boom come back to it and reboot the book from scratch.
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- Lucien1211mthCommentedFeeling perplexed but left with no other option, he wasted no time dashing toward the reckless child who finally turned toward the oncoming truck but instead of trying to move away from it, he froze in fear, unaware of what he should do next.
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ah gotcha lol I like the novel so far my gf mad bf i spent 20 bucks on coins🤣🤣
Lilith is the First Primordial Human, someone created from Adam's rib, the First Human Progenitor. In the case of this Lilith, many questions were questionable: how did she become a demon? How did she live in the human world as a goddess? Was she a goddess? - Lucien1211mthReplied to Katanexy
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BOOM! - Lucien1211mthCommented
eve was the rib to be equal with him Lilith was created the same way as Adam
Lilith is the First Primordial Human, someone created from Adam's rib, the First Human Progenitor. In the case of this Lilith, many questions were questionable: how did she become a demon? How did she live in the human world as a goddess? Was she a goddess? - Lucien1211mthCommented
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Except for one in particular who had been relentlessly pursuing him... that would be Katarina Ainsworth. Dante had been trying to stay hidden from her lately, but she always found him. It was as if she had put a tracker on him... or rather, she had marked him with her scent. As a Catkin, she could do that since despite being humanoid, she still had her feline instincts, and it had reached an extreme. She had tried every way to capture Dante, but even the Director had to intervene. She became slightly obsessed with Dante, and after her outburst at the end of the event...