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Comments of chapter undefined of Sage's Cultivation: Mage in Cultivation World

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Sage's Cultivation: Mage in Cultivation World

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Bored_to_the_W0rld
Bored_to_the_W0rldLv10Bored_to_the_W0rld

Some of the words use in the construction of a sentence doesn't fit. So it sounds ridiculous sometimes. The novel was good at first but I don't know it became a mess after his meeting with Felicity. I tried to keep on reading but I guess, this isy limit. The mc's character which is changing a lot is the worst for me. Sorry, since I'm having a headache now reading it. Gonna stop here. Still thanks for the earlier chapters.

1yr
Readtilltheybleed
ReadtilltheybleedLv10Readtilltheybleed

đŸ€ŠđŸ»WTF That escalated way too quick! It doesn’t even make any sense
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2yr
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Iruma_kun
Iruma_kunLv4Iruma_kun

That guy mental. Author will reason that it's the side effect of a cultivation technique.

2yr
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warlockgeass604
warlockgeass604Lv4warlockgeass604

The flow of the story is good and it's concept is interesting, but the grammar is not that good. Maybe you can try to improve your English more, it's just my thought hope your not offended, and I know you're trying because everyone does right? 😊 Fate made me stumble upon your work and I like it because I love reading and your story is great, but sad to say, the gramatization will fail to hook more readers interest, I'm sure there's a lot out there who would like to read a good read. Sorry for the 'not so good comment/review' I just really like your story so I want to see more improvement for it, keep up your work I know you can do it 😘

2yr
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NaKii
NaKiiLv4NaKii

Idiot

2yr
Sagely_pervert
Sagely_pervertLv4Sagely_pervert

thanks for the chapter

2yr
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