yohananmikhael
Hey … Um …. To be honest from just the first chapter I don’t like the mc’s character design …… He seems like a country bumpkin for a 1000 years old Sage . To be a Immortal- Magus is not a Joke …. Although author seems to be a noob but at least you should think a few more ways to make the character more smart if want to introduce him as a 1000 years old man . He could use spells to pry peoples talk or use hypnotic spell to make people talk , he should pry what the strange energy is as all wizards and mages would do …. And many more right away ….. overall the first chaps intro itself gives a …… you know