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Comments of chapter undefined of Sage's Cultivation: Mage in Cultivation World

deeejmx
deeejmxLv14deeejmx

I really want to read this, but the grammar is bad. It's hard to enjoy. Good luck!

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EIo_Police
EIo_PoliceLv14EIo_Police

would be good if you would use a grammar program. You mess up tenses quite often and misuse words, which makes reading those sentences confusing.

Scholar_of_Dawn
Scholar_of_DawnLv4Scholar_of_Dawn

one thousand years old grandpa yet still act like a teenager.

WISEDRAGON
WISEDRAGONLv6WISEDRAGON

Hey … Um …. To be honest from just the first chapter I don’t like the mc’s character design …… He seems like a country bumpkin for a 1000 years old Sage . To be a Immortal- Magus is not a Joke …. Although author seems to be a noob but at least you should think a few more ways to make the character more smart if want to introduce him as a 1000 years old man . He could use spells to pry peoples talk or use hypnotic spell to make people talk , he should pry what the strange energy is as all wizards and mages would do …. And many more right away ….. overall the first chaps intro itself gives a …… you know

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David_Adetola
David_AdetolaLv4David_Adetola

if magic can't be compared to cultivation does that mean that lucas will learn cultivation

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Sagely_pervert
Sagely_pervertLv4Sagely_pervert

thanks for the chapter

wajoli_zako
wajoli_zakoLv4wajoli_zako

does he still have the sword?

Lordmarvel1
Lordmarvel1Lv1Lordmarvel1

Thanks for the chap

LawWillOblivionK
LawWillOblivionKLv13LawWillOblivionK

Thanks for the chapter

Fraudryn
FraudrynLv13Fraudryn

Well, who knows how excentric a 1000 years old immortal mage with suicidal tendencies from another world would be ? We can't judge him with our common sense. Does he have any reason not to act immature?

Zaitro
ZaitroLv12Zaitro

Well, at the end, most of fictional powers are just some kind of energy manipulation, unless we are dealing with powers regarding laws and concepts. I think them as the origin of energy, and many other things.

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx

Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

👍

yohananmikhael
yohananmikhaelAuthoryohananmikhael

yeah, it will be explained why he still have that kind of personality

SLYWIN2
SLYWIN2Lv15SLYWIN2

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Nathan_Goode
Nathan_GoodeLv13Nathan_Goode

Thank you, brother. Good to see you doing this story

Love_Lover
Love_LoverLv13Love_Lover

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

Xiaoyunyun
XiaoyunyunLv2Xiaoyunyun

"Absence of stupidity makes things unrealistic." "YohananMikhael" I heard if you can comprehend this quote. You will summon heavenly tribulation and if u survive that u will able to create worlds / universe with your own hands just like the author.

Demono_Free
Demono_FreeLv12Demono_Free

good to see that other people think the way i do magic and cultivation is not to be compared

Dogfonos
DogfonosLv12Dogfonos

alrigth Im hooked