Er Gen’s stories are written like he forgot the plot part way thru. With plot holes, retconning, or straight up inconsistencies. The world development is usually interesting. But the formula for his stories are pretty much all the same. Reading the stories in one sitting instead of waiting for chapter updates really brings up out the obvious issues with his style of writing.

Nvm, next chapter answers it. A ghost apparently

If Patriach Vast Expanse was not a demon, devil, god, or immortal; then what was he?

I liked the story at first, but chapters get ridiculously short in the later chapters. I don’t see how 2 minutes of the main character thinking to themself is considered a chapter.

Insects definitely do not have blood. They have hemolymph, which is not the same as blood.

Hence the word ”very”.

Story is so good, but chapters are way too short for the amount of coin they cost. It was good while lasted. If this story taught me anything, it's to beware of people trying to take all your money!

Sigh, needy female character on every assignment.

Bye Dalia! Love to see you go.

Nah fam. It hasn't even been a few months yet. Not liking Delia or Khan's interactions.

Nooooooooo. I will not abide any other love interests in Khan's life. Nope. This is too much. I'm crying.

Such good writing. I'm not crying, I just have something in my eye. 😩

REATEN

Errybody gonna learn his name today!

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Tough love lol

I laughed so hard I started choking during the nurse apartment scene. Great story so far!

Interesting concept so far. Enjoying it! -dives bacck in-

Sigh, the story is getting boring without Daniel.

I really want to read this, but the grammar is bad. It's hard to enjoy. Good luck!