EIo_Police
Hello
of reading
698
Read books
Badges
19Moments
567
EIo_Police3dCommentedauthor is 100% white
[ Ahem* Ahem* it seems you don't know your position, listen here you nigga, I will give you 2 days worth of time...- EIo_Police1mthReplied to Dao_Of_Sauce
author is trying to be incredibly edgy and "cool" for no reason. it makes it just more cringe
Zane had honestly forgotten that these two pesky flies were still surrounding him, or he would have if the constant reminder that they were the reason he was having such difficulties getting to his destination was in the back of his mind. - EIo_Police1mthPosted
While I really enjoy the world setting, I have major problems with the MC. To me, he is the worst MC I have ever witnessed. He is a proper narcissist, with a terrible attitude. He is a highly flawed character, but apparently, everyone is just too stupid to see it or to actually bother. He treats everyone except for Susan like shit and gets an attitude when he's being called out for it. He just has too many plot armours to get a proper reality check. There are honestly too many character flaws to list...
- EIo_Police1mthCommented
instead of giving them troop Plans earlier on he waits for no reason. the can pay later but waiting longer just deminishes their chance of survival. and he legit didn't give them anything for free.
This book has been deleted. - EIo_Police1mthCommented
????????
At first, I thought I had misheard. 18 points instead of 180 points? - EIo_Police1mthCommented
get ur names right, who tf are Vale and Lisa.
On the other hand, Harper and Lisa helped Shane by carrying and placing the pikes around the church. They also used the metal pipes and the broken pikes to reinforce the fence, adding more strength and durability. - EIo_Police5mthCommented
who tf is land?
This book has been deleted. - EIo_Police6mthCommentedCh 28 Chapter 28: Moonshadow City pt-2
- EIo_Police7mthCommented
nothing should've changed since the mc never interfered with anything related to the party....
'Oh, now I remember, that one guy from school, what was his name again, Felix Wayne. Yeah, somebody got killed during the party. Caroline was taken by the guys that tried to rob the place, and she was never seen again, right after that, Gloria never smiled the same way as she used to. But this time, she came back home safe and sound. What an immense change in things,' he thought. - EIo_Police7mthCommented
nothing made sense in this paragraph...
They all nodded and went to his side as he walked out. Caroline walked downstairs with her hands raised. - EIo_Police8mthCommented
he told every former slave where the city is, and now he is moving the city lol
The speed of the city travelling within each second was incomparably fast that if any of the citizens blinked, they would discover new seas and land. - EIo_Police8mthCommented
what???
"What is this? Probably like a bra?" Gab questioned, referring to the unusual undergarment. He realized that men were expected to wear bras in this world, unlike his previous reality. - EIo_Police9mthCommentedCh 1 Wokeup as a pretty Boy
- EIo_Police9mthCommented
bro, she is 12??????
She was wearing a maid out , even though it looked like a normal maid outfit but her short skirt and white knee length socks with black heels made her look really sexy . - EIo_Police9mthCommented
where is Sarah?
Moreover, almost all the maids in the manor, except for Maya and Vera, had retired, leaving a void behind. Adding to the turmoil, Maya's parents, who had been staunchly loyal to Cian's father, had switched their allegiance to the Horselle family. They wished for Maya to serve the Horselles, but she remained steadfast in her commitment to the Lambhart name, insisting that her loyalty would not waver merely because the Lord of Lambhart had passed away. However, the grim reality remained: the Lambhart Earldom teetered on the precipice of eradication. - EIo_Police9mthReplied to EIo_Police
gwen was one of the strongest ppl in the entire kingdom, defeated by some random dude. sounds super forced only to get Hem on a revenge arc or something.
This paragraph has been deleted. - EIo_Police9mthCommented
that Sound incredibly forced and kind of like Victoria is just a skyrim npc. no reflexes, nothing...
This paragraph has been deleted. - EIo_Police10mthCommentedCh 36 Chapter 36 - Back at Home
- EIo_Police10mthCommented
bruh Same old trope
As the man of the house, I took his job as a farmer, I didn't earn much, but I was able to provide money for my mother and myself, but it seems fate decided that, I had to go alone in my journy, since two years after the death of my father, my mother joined him, leaving me alone in this world. - EIo_Police10mthCommented
???
"A villain is fair. A villain sees reality for what it is, a hero is all about hope, and hope isn't saving anyone today or tomorrow, Take me back inside if you please," I said as I turned and went inside, then the gate closed behind me.