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Comments of chapter undefined of Epic of Summoner: Supreme Summoner System in the Apocalypse

wolfeng
wolfengLv10wolfeng

Dialogue was a bit on the cringe side, especially the "breed you well". But one thing you might want to change is all the uses of "glaring" for "staring" Glaring should be used to when looking at someone angrily or fiercely.

HentaiConnoisseur
HentaiConnoisseurLv3HentaiConnoisseur

We did it boys~

FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13FallenAngeI

great chapter. Keep up with the good work

Lannydar
LannydarLv14Lannydar

😀 👍 👍 Thanks for the Work

Nero_Okita
Nero_OkitaLv15Nero_Okita

Kinda felt super weird, since he hoped to summon her to have a mother figure in life.

Arkage
ArkageLv15Arkage

Ayush_Shukla_8340
Ayush_Shukla_8340Lv2Ayush_Shukla_8340

Thank you for your amazing work

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

Zeyziel
ZeyzielLv14Zeyziel

Since the descriptions of what goes where during s*x were biologically inaccurate it made reading it difficult

Snorlax777
Snorlax777Lv11Snorlax777

Its so strange when you know that the mc setting her personality as 'motherly' to fill the hole of mother figure in mc life.

Daoiste4CjAj
Daoiste4CjAjLv1Daoiste4CjAj

wow