Comments of chapter undefined of The Last Warlock

Pretty good intro.

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Good luck with the contest... :)

added ;)

he's a bit edgy but alright still tolerable well anything is tolerable as long as the story doesn't have a harem or lolis

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Done!

thanks for the chapter

Gotta say the imagery in this chapter was a banger

The Intro was very interesting and sets the action in motion. Good job! That’s the hardest thing to do. The room for improvement that I can pick up are: Stay in one tense; I’ve noticed the story switches from past to present tense sometimes And lastly, instead of telling that the MC is going to cry, showing the emotions of nostalgia is a much better approach. I actually had a lot of trouble doing that myself. Overrall, it was a fantastic intro

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I loved the first chapter