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Comments of chapter undefined of Inverse System

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Inverse System

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DrowZ
DrowZLv14DrowZ

Im gonna be dropping this book. The forced companionship of the villan and mc was forced poor writing. It just makes the reader hate the villan even more, with all attempts to humanize the villan making zero sense.

2yr
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Wizzez
WizzezAuthorWizzez

Well, he doesn't team up with him, he's just taken against his will, and for some unknown reason by Core. He doesn't become his companion at all, in fact, they actually split up at chapter 8. Though I understand if it's not your cup of tea. This was my first go at writing, so it's understandable that people wont like it. 😅

2yr
KarmaKalo
KarmaKaloLv12KarmaKalo

And the beginning of the story talked about him being mature and smart for his age with babysitting and whatnot.

2yr
13
Solo_BiriBiriBiri
Solo_BiriBiriBiriLv2Solo_BiriBiriBiri

He should have atleast ignore him instead of trying to reveal about his dream or he could try to enslave that guy to torture him or use him as a practice dummy since he's somewhat immortal.

2yr
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LongSongGolden
LongSongGoldenLv14LongSongGolden

Wow, MC is a retard. oh this guy was involved with the deaths of my sister and everyone in my village, but he's friendly now so I can trust him with the knowledge of my secret system. I get he's like 10 but most 10yr olds I know aren't that trusting of homicidal strangers.

2yr
8
Daoist_Red_Reads
Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4Daoist_Red_Reads

You know it would be more interesting if it was a spring instead of this...

1yr
2
Gamer_Link22
Gamer_Link22Lv3Gamer_Link22

the mc is 10 years old try to push through until the timeskip he should've matured by then.

2yr
1
Jamahl_Shand
Jamahl_ShandLv1Jamahl_Shand

I really hope he wont be the type to go around pretending to be weak

2yr
1
Aztec_Azazel
Aztec_AzazelLv13Aztec_Azazel

Why though?

1yr
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